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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 00:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you're wonderfull story! As for koga inuyasha had better hand him his ass on a platter! I hope for a very happy ending for our favorite characters. What role will sesh play in this story? I hope he helps Inuyasha rip koga apart. I hope they cut his manhood off!!!
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 22:09 PDT
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God, I love it! Thanks for another wonderful chapter. I'm also pleasantly surprised to see a fanfict story where the cops are actually on top of the situation. Maybe they will be using Kagome to land the head of the Kyoto Yakuza? Not that they know that Koga was involved right now, but maybe in the future. And this is great. Koga's come to get Kagome, but she'll end up shacking up with Inuyasha. So in effect Koga helps the two of them get closer together. I love it. And will Inuyasha tell Kagome that Koga is after her? I doubt it. But who knows, you might surprise me (again). And I'm still chomping at the bit for a nice confrontation between Koga and Inuyasha. I'm just waiting for Koga to say those immortal words, "Get your hands off my woman!" Snicker! Eagerly awaiting your next installment.
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 21:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW i wonder when she's going 2 realize that person that's looking 4 her is koga UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: xyanblue On: November 01, 2008 19:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this was such a good chapter so much emtion i can't for the next chapter pleaseeeee update soon
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 18:44 PDT
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You are awesome. :D Keep up the great work, hon!!!
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 18:39 PDT
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poor inuyasha he's so confused. poor kagome
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Reviewed By: nicc85 On: October 29, 2008 20:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. Poor Sango. I'm glad he didn't get the chance to do even more harm.
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Title: well this is a first...
Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 17:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry.. i can find no words for this chapter... maybe next time (enjoyment factors a nine because of the stress caused by sango's situation, not because of anything wrong with the chapter itself)
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Title: AAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGG
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 21:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOO THY FOUL AND EVIL WRITER!!!! POOR SANGO!!!! IT'S GOOD THAT NOTHING MORE HAPPENED ALTHO WHAT YOU PUT HER THROUGH WAS TRAUMATIC AND DEVASTATING TO HER !!!! AT LEAST MIROKU WILL BE THERE FOR HER.... KAGS AND YASHA PERFECTION PERSONIFIED THERE RELATIONSHIP IS LIKE A WILD ROLLER COASTER RID WITH BOTH TRYING TO HIDE FROM THERE OWN HEART SO HARD IT HURTS!!!! NOW WITH THEM REALIZING THERE NEED FOR EACH OTHER!!!! .LOVED THE I'M NOT GOING TO CHASE YOU!!! AND DOING JUST THAT.... AND HER WHY CAN'T I LEAVE YOU!!!! WHEN THE ANSWER IS SO EASY FOR EVERYONE TO SEE BUT THEM.... AS FOR DINSHU IT BETTER BE SLOW AND PAINFUL AND I HOPE SANGO IS THE ONE TO DO IT!!!! WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS^-^
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Reviewed By: MadMistress65 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 08:28 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally caught up. Awesome chapter! Poor Sango. Sango's a fighter though and I'm sure she will pull through this and want to kiss some ass and take some names. At least that is what I'm hoping. Our dog boy's demon is coming to the surface and he think's he is going nuts. Poor guy. I have to admit that normally, I would have been chomping at the bit of declarations of love, etc. However, with that being said, I am really liking the slower progression of the relationship between InuYasha and Kagome that you have going here. Can't wait for the next updated and CONGRATS on taking first place at the Guild.
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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 04:45 PDT
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I just absolutely love how they can't leave each other. I can't stand to see Sango so broken. You really know how to make the blood pump don't you, I look forward to reading your next update. Thank you so very very much for sharing your story.
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Reviewed By: u ignorent fools [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 20:56 PDT
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First, Congradulations on the nomination. Second,I just think that Inuyasha is ignorant in most fics, and on the show. (no pun intended). Poor Sango, but if I saw that my tire was slashed I would not hang up the phone even in a low signal area. I'm not strong though, I'm weak. Identity theft, rape, and internal damage to an essential organ, what a crap shoot day for the girl. good chapter, i'm anxious to see whats next.
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 15:52 PDT
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Omgoodness poor Sango i cant believe that happened to her. What must Miroku be thinking and feeling rite now? And Koga has finally found kagome unfortunetly what is she gonna do??? Ugh all this bad news in one chapter. But one gud thing is that Inuyashas finally starting to accept how much he needs and truly cares for Kagome. well no matter how much bad news there was it was an awesome chapter and i cant wait till the next one so update soon!! Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 03:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I want to say congratulations on getting nominated. Hell with this story Im not at all surprised about it. And as for Sango getting almost rapped... Hope the bastard gets whats coming. And I hope after that ordeal she'll heal completly, with Miroku at her side of course... I have to say that was sweet how Kagome couldn't leave Inuyasha like that, same with Inuyasha on his part too... Well hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 21:10 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Poor Sango! That bastard Kouga has got to pay! Although he wasn't the one who raped Sango, he was the one who put that rotten piece of garbage up to it. And now her state of mind is wrecked.....not to mention her body. that pool of blood really concerns me. And Miroku has a tough road ahead helping Sango pick up the pieces. But I'm sure he's up to it. As for Inuyasha, his demon side is slowly but surely forcing him to acknowledge what he feels for Kagome....and some part of her feels it too. The chemistry between the two of them is wonderful....I just hope that they're ready to deal with Kouga. Kouga.....if ever someone needed to be utterly DESTROYED, he does. He has trashed a lot of people's lives. I really hope that he gets what he deserves....like being forced to be someone's bitch in prison. He should enjoy it; he certainly seems to enjoy forcing it on the poor women who dare to stand up to him!
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