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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2008 07:53 PST
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Ahhhhhh! XD I never in a million YEARS thought she had run into Sessh! LOLOLOL that is awesome. I thought it was going to be a bad guy. XD XDD You rock. I heart this story. :D
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Reviewed By: Bre'Auna Kemp On: December 17, 2008 05:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome story sorry that i havn't been reviewing, but me don't have internet anymore. sorry but keep up the good work
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: inufan987 On: December 17, 2008 01:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to say, this fanfic is in my top 5. everytime i read another chapter, my heart just leaps. you had me crying at the emotions between inu and kags. you're an amazing writer and i can't wait to read what you have in store for them.
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2008 00:46 PST
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D8 not Kouga XD sesshy=LOVE! XD kouga spy dun dun dunnnnN!!!
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2008 23:26 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh that was very snicky letting me think there was a big fight coming last chapter. I'm still a little afraid about how she's going to take what Inuyasha has to tell her...aaaaahh until 2009 then.
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Reviewed By: EarthSong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2008 23:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You may hate lovey-dovy stuff, but damn if you can't write some amazing work. If I had half the writing talent you have, I'd consider following my dream of writing a book( but sadly, I don't so I'll just stick to reviewing). Anyway keep'em coming. Your devoted(more like addicted) reader, EarthSong
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Reviewed By: Aki_Iida [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2008 05:00 PST
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Argh....talk about a cliffhanger*flails* I cant wait to see what happens....please update soon I ab I don't think I can handle the suspenseXD P.S. I love your story. You're an AWESOME writer^-^
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Title: Bravo!
Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 21:33 PST
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I am more of lurker nowadays, but your story compels me to leave a review. Thank you for gifting us with an Inu-Kag story that gives us a new take on jaded, broken people in the process of healing. Both Inuyasha and Kagome clearly have baggage and as much as I love happy endings (truly, dearly!) I love your judicious use of angst as the two realize their feelings for one another. What a heartbreaking situation for Sango and Miroku! I think you do a wonderful job of allowing all of the characters we know and love to have their dark moments - after all, nobody is perfect. But I must confess, I also like how you tend to resolve arguments/issues between the characters sooner rather than later without making it seem forced or cliché. It really takes skill to do that. So now you know, I'm hoping that Inuyasha will be able to start repairing some of the damage his thoughtless words have caused in this next chapter...because he's now beginning to appreciate what Kagome means to him. I for one can't think too badly of Inuyasha...it would be out of character for him to go from being suspicious of women to suddenly being all mushy-gushy for one. And he still has some work to do in the self awareness department since it appeared the whole issue of his youkai choosing a mate was news to him (back to the convo with his godfather). I can't wait for Kouga to get what he deserves! But really, I'm dying for reconciliation between Inu-Kag. Great job...can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 09:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so in love with this story! Awesome job and keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 14:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I understand Miroku's pain, but dang he was kind of harsh. Can he imagine what Sango's would be like had it been the other way around? Or what if something like this happens to her and then what would he say? Yes Inu messed up big time, but I think Rin will beat him up better than anyone else. Once they have a heart to heart talk. For some reason it seems like she is the only that can talk some sense into him. Who's the mystery man??? Sorry for just now reviewing. Got a little busy before I finished the first chapter and just now catching. Keep going!
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Reviewed By: bigfanofiykag [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2008 14:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't usually give ratings when I write reviews, but I could not help it this time. This story has me in stitches. I really do love this story. I love the song that Kagome was listening to after she left InuYasha in his bed alone. I had not heard that song "Silly of Me" in a long time and it fits perfectly into the way Kagome felt after InuYasha practically told her that she was not good enough. The crazy fool doesn't know a good thing until he's about to lose it. And poor Kagome, taking Miroku's abusive language because of what some creep did to Sango. And then poor Sango, she might not be able to have kids, and then poor Miroku, feeling like hell because of what happened to Sango. Poor everybody except old stupid baka, InuYasha, but then, you can't help but feel sorry for him because he's scared to make that commitment because of Kikyo. Poor Everybody!!! Update as soon as you possible can. I'm waiting patiently. Well, as patient as one can when reading a very, very good story. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: EarthSong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2008 13:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! I love your style. You absolutely keep me guessing, and waiting for more! Keep'em coming girl!
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 22:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Skittles!!!!! This is so... so... *sob* you just left me hanging! It's such a great story and I love the way everything is coming along. The way you have the two diffrent POV's intersecting one another is really nice. There only a few writers that I have come across that can do that flawlessly and you are one of them. Inuyasha is a baka, you know... and for that matter so is Kagome... for the both of them thinking along the lines that they are. Irony is a terrible, terrible thing. The stranger... Gosh I hope it's not Kouga or that ass-monkey Dinshu. How bout we all keep our fingers crossed hope that it's a doctor. As for Sango and Miroku... I really feel sorry for them. I believe there was another fic somewhere else... where Sango and Miroku could not have chilren.. hmm?... I'm going to have to look that up...though your take on this situation is totally diffrent than the other writers... if I remember correctly, nothing at all to do with attempted rape. Anyways, I love this new twist in the fic and I am must proudly yet sadly say that it has me on the edge of my seat. Oh and even though I was not able to review on the last chapter I have been reading your fic faithfully. It's just that sometimes... well actually MOST of the time I am reading most fics from my cell phone and I am unable to review from that because the small screen will not allow me to type in the spam filter required to okay the review. I hope to see an update soon! Maybe before Christmas? Or how about a bday present for me huh? *grin* Which is on the 14th by the way! *hint, hint* TTFN ~Tusuke Kounami
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 20:32 PST
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It was driving me crazy not reading the chapters as they came out but I really had alot of homework ... but I did finally break down and read the last few that I missed... I needed a pleasant break from the papers and tests. I just absolutely love you story. I am frustrated that he is messing things up ... and that she is jumping to conclusions and all of that stuff... but that does add to the angst. I do so hope that Inu does not kill that person that she is clinging to unless it happens to be the aweful Dinshu guy or Kauga. Maybe it is Sesshy ... hhhmmmm???? Thanks again for sharing this wonderful story and congratulations on your award.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 17:04 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha....I bet the guy she's leaning on is Sesshomaru. He must've had so many wierd moments with Kagome already. She flashes him her boobs, ogles him...he sooooooo should push for a restraining order. ;P But anyway, Holy friggin' craaack! Both of them kinda(and Kagome did) realized their feelings for each other! Shweet! But now Kagome has to go ruin it by crying all over the Sesshiles-mystery person -___- Can't really blame her, though Miroku was rightly pissed, too. I like how it wasn't Sango to tear into her either, because Miroku isn't one you'd expect. And the ENDING...whats InuYasha gonna do??? Gah! You're stringing me along here woman...s-t-r-i-n-g-i-n-g ME ALONG! Lol...(Kinda crazyish right now..blame lack of sleep). Update when you next get a chance! I absolutely looooved the chapter. Can you tell??? ~Amber >.
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