| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 02:32 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful read, the characters seem to fit the world very nicely wouldn't call them OOC at all. I'll be back untill the end
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: November 06, 2008 06:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, talk about your drama. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 03:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... hope Kagome gets to visit Sango sometime soon... And I can see the reason why she didn't think Koga could do any of that... Seeing as how she saw him "loving" his wife and all... And I d pray that things go right on your end... Hell a lot of things aren't going right in places... Well hope you update and keep it up. Pease...
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 03:40 PST
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Awwwww poor Kagome. I really think she shouldve told the detectives about Koga though because he fits the description they gave her perfectly! And theres not only drama in Kagomes part of the story but in Inuyashas part too. He just cant accept the fact that hes gonna love her unlike any other love hes ever had and hes gonna be with her forever just because i say so! Lol well im sure you agree with me and probably most of the people reading this story. But anywoo great chapter cant wait until the next one and when is Inuyasha gonna tell Kagome what he knows about Koga and will he figure out its him when Kagome tells him what happened? Ok i really need you to update soon so that I can get my questions answered! :] Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [not signed in] On: November 04, 2008 14:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are a great author! i love this story! and update soon! =D
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Reviewed By: mrskouga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 10:45 PST
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this is a really good story i thought i ran out of good fanfictions to read!!! you've really out done your self! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 18:57 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oo wow! it's getting more intense!! i cant wait for the next chapter :D
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: November 02, 2008 15:50 PST
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Will Inu tell Kagome everything once he finds out what has happen to Kagome's friend? Update really soon.
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 12:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh snap. what will happen next? lol. thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 10:31 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. It seems so unjust that Kagome has to pay the price for waht Kouga did. But, at the same time, you can definitely understand Kagome's employers point-of-view. That jerk Kouga needs to pay in SO many ways. As for Inuyasha, he is being a bit of an abrupt jerk right now. But...he's confused about and fighting falling in love with Kagome. Someone should tell him that it's already too late. Man, men are bratty babies when it come to emotion, lol. I just hope that he and Kagome are ready for the trials that are coming.
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Reviewed By: MadMistress65 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 05:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This thing with the credit cards and Kikyo has me intrigued. I'm wracking my brain trying to figure out how you are going to play this out. I can't help but wonder if there's an indirect connection, although unknown, between Kikyo and Koga somehow, but that's probably stretching it. I'm happy that Kagome didn't go running off but went to InuYasha with this. And I'm wondering how long it's going to take Inu to release that it's his demon blood speaking to him. At any rate, I know I have to wait to find out but I can't help but come up with my own variations. LOL Great update! Can't wait for the next. Hang in there, Sango. Poor gal. I hope she pulls through all this.
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 03:49 PST
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I am just so sad after reading this chapter. But damn I wish I had Inu to hold me when my world was crumbling around me. I wonder how she will react when she finds out it is Kouga? Great chapter... wanted more.. want to know how Sango is. Sorry to hear about all personal issues and hope that things do get better. Thanks again for sharing your story.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader On: November 02, 2008 01:54 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh you sadist. You absolutely brillant, unfair sadist. How could you leave it there? Can't wait to see what happens next. Excellent as per. I await the next chapter eagerly *bows*
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: November 02, 2008 01:16 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't ask why I'm up 4:00 in the morning on a weekend...lol. But the good news is that I just saved alot of money by switching to geico...lmao. No, seriously...I'm glad I was up to catch your update. Don't worry about the wait, real life does happen and when it does you can't control it. I hope everything will be ok. And nice job on the chapter too. I hope Sango will be ok and I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 01:52 PDT
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I love this story, it's one of about 5 that I get update emails for. But one thing did bother me about this chapter. Why are they only suspecting someone from her past, would they not cover other avenues? She is an attorney, my first assumption would be that it had to do with one of the cases she was working on (that is if I didn't already know it was kouga) I just think that they would at least bring that up. BUt besides that little detail, I have no other issues with the story, & I do enjoy it, so keep up the good work!
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