| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 07:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This certainly was a serious change of events! Kikyou is back in the picture... but not badder than ever because she still has feelings for our beloved hanyou. Onigumo.... why is that he has been described to look just like InuYasha and Sesshoumaru? Or was she just imagining that her husband looked like InuYasha? Great chapter... I am eager to read the next!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 13:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, Im sorry I didn't get my ass up and read your story and respond to the WONDERFUL plot that you have sprouted upon us... And damn I was very glad that you have updated yet another chapter, and so quickly too! Now as for the story, I hope Sango and Miroku will get through the problem they are having and that Miroku gets to kick the ass of the person that has dare to touch and rid of Sango's "innocents". Im kinda peeved that Kikyo is coming back in the picture, and yet glad that she's coming in. It'll make the story more and more interesting, plus it'll be juicy to see how Kagome reacts. Well hope you update (which you will because you're having more fun than ever) and keep up the work. Peace... P.S. The reason why i haven't been early on commenting is.... Well lets just say blame life and a brand new mp3 player (grins)
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 03:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sheesh... didn't know Din was such a smart and "waiting" person... Plus he's thinking and using that head of his. His plan might work, but I doubt Inuyasha and Sesshomaru would give him the chance. Well Im happy that you updated again and that you kept this story in tiptop shape. Peace...
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Title: WOW WAT A SURPRISE!!!!!
Reviewed By: Lilsweetpea011 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 14:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bringin Kikyo into the story is really a shocker....plz dnt let my fav couple break apart!!! But cool story cnt wait for the nxt chapter!!!!!!!
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Title: NO! not the bitch
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 22:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha better not fall for it, and Kagome better not fall for that other stuff eaither... AH!! I can feel the angst comin on. I'm going to hide in the shed.
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Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 16:44 PST
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Wow... I just read the whole fanfic, and it's really good. It's been a while since I've seen such good charictor development! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 08:45 PST
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Oh no! Kikyou! x____x ahhh!
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Reviewed By: Inukag-mirosan lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 14:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gosh!!! i found this story and i am FINALLY caught up with all the chapters! :D i really love this story! it is SOO good!! I hate kikyo, i really wish she'd just drown or something!! :( grrrrrrrrrrrr. anyway, last chapter was really good!!! :D can't wait until next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 07:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! now both ex's are back in the game! i'd love to see the turnout of this!
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 00:32 PST
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Oh dear, the bitch is coming back to seduce Inuyasha and to try to take his money again. It's nice to see her as a three dimensional character that you can actually have some sympathy for (rather than the typical 2 dimensional Kikyo that I usually see in fan ficts). I'm not looking forward to her arrival, but we all knew it was coming! My guess is that Kikyo will make a play for Inuyasha which will have Kagome jealous and even more unsure of her relationship to Inuyasha. Here's to hoping that he pushes Kikyo away and lets her know in no uncertain terms that he's done with her and has moved on. The segment on Miroku and Sango was so sad. I only hope that Sango can pull herself together enough to let them both heal. Please give us another lemon (with Inu/Kag) in the next chapter. Puleaze??!! We'd all love it. Thanks for writing and congradulations on the nominations. I love this story!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2009 10:18 PST
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noo i don't want her back not when kogas thereee. update again soon!!!
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Reviewed By: nicc85 On: January 23, 2009 23:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah, it definitely feels like a lot is going to happen in the next few chapters to come. i was wondering when kikyo's raggedy behind was going to show up. lol. i don't think (well, i hope) inuyasha doesn't fall for whatever sob story she gives. i see i'm not the only one that thinks kagome would beat the mess out of her.lol.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 22:00 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Inuyasha really needs to tell Kagome who Kouga really is and what he's done to her. I know that he's hesitant to cause her pain, but her denial is truly becoming a problem. And Sango and Miroku....it's enough to break your heart. They are in so much pain...my goodness. And, quite frankly, I think Kagome should be ashamed of herself when it comes to Sango. I know that Miroku was angry with her and that he said some very hurtful things. And, yes, Kagome does have her owm problems. But she could at least try to call and check on Sango, particularly since she got hurt for apparently trying to protect her. And isn't Kagome smart enough to realize that Sango's attack and her rape scare could possibly be related? And, even before you get to all that, Sango is a FRIEND who just found out that she probably won't be able to have kids due to a brutal rape. That alone should be enough to make Kagome realize that she needs to be a friend to her. Like I said before, Inuyasha really needs to enlighten her so that she can embrace reality. Her blindness is getting a bit bothersome. And as for Kikyo, the hoebag returns...and this time she's bringing her pimp. I can't wait to see Kagome square off with her. I really do like Kagome's character ( in spite of how it may seem with the stuff I said regarding Sango, lol), so I will definitely enjoy imagining Kagome kicking Kiyo's a**. It truly couldn't happen to a "nicer" chick....and it will definitely make things interesting (as if we didn't have enough things going on, lol). GREAT story.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: January 23, 2009 21:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Waves hands in the air* I'm still here!!! *lol* Sorry for lurking. The pinching of Inu was funny as hell. And I'm glad to see the story progressing. Seems like alot of shit is going to hit the fan soon. Keep up the great work girly and I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 20:47 PST
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i was wondering if Onigumo/naraku would show up and i wasnt expecting that either...cool cool...I hope that miroku and sango are able to get better...its gotta be tough but i love them as a ouple XD thanks for the update though and I cant wait for the next one
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