| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: helen11 On: July 03, 2009 19:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i just found this website like a week ago and i fell in love with this story, but hey it's been like forever since you updated, HURRY PLZ im dyin here!
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Title: we are merely playthings
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2009 20:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm begining to understand that it must just be fun the leave us dangling on a cliff...I think I'll quit conplaining about it. I'll just wait for the next chapter. Where Kagome get herself out of the mess she's in ({please})
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 18:42 PDT
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hey just one thing because you're probably tired of my reviews lol, but the initials for Takira and Gage, shouldn't they be GT and TT. You wrote GH and TH, but if Sess has the same last name as Inuasyasha than I think you made a little mistake there.
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Title: BOO!!! Kouga
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 04:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That had better be Inuyasha she's sucker facing it with outside... I don't even want to think about the alternative.
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Reviewed By: Ravens_Ashs On: June 22, 2009 15:13 PDT
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I tend to agree with some of the other reviewers...there is no way that that could have been Kouga at the end of the story. That has to be Inuyasha because Kagome is completely through with Kouga and loves Inuyashs, despite her being mad at him. I know that the characters are walking the fine line of OOCness, but Kagome isn't THAT far over the line. Please don't keep us hangin'...Update soon. We are waiting on baited breath...hehehe. Keep up the great work;)
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Title: You were right!
Reviewed By: MadMistress65 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2009 08:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, let me apologize for not reviewing lately. I have no excuse. I just ... well ... forgot, I guess. Anyway, I'm here, now and I just want to say that you were absolutely right. This chapter certainly did piss me off. Big time. LOL However, I'm sure it was as difficult for you to write as it was difficult for many of us to read. But, that withstanding, it's still a kick ass story, and I'm hanging in there with you until the end!! I skimmed some of the pages and have to go back and re-read fully again, but from what I did read I'm having this really bad feeling that, that was Kouga that Kagome was wrapped around at the end. No No No! Oh and can we say a certain dog-boy needs a serious bitch-slapping? Sheesh. How can one be so dense? Sess should know better. He should just tell him. ARG! Sorry, going off on a wild tangent. I do that sometimes. LMAO Anyhoooo, anxiously awaiting the next update.
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Title: Obsessed
Reviewed By: Shaelyn-Bobaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2009 12:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was reading chapter 34 and one thing stuck to me. The fact that Totosai said she was barren! I mean, you can use the fact that he's senile, but I don't think that a demon would be able to miscalculate the smell of a pregnant woman, then I think back. *Currently rambling realllly fast* the first time Inuyasha and Kagome had sex, they didn't use a condom, only after that, they did!!!!!! I have a feeling this wont be brought up again, but... my god, that made me excited.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2009 03:14 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eye twitches* in a way i now know why i left to read this a while.... if that is Koga.... Ooo god all hell will break loose!!!! and i kinda read the part where Kagome called Sesshy twice for some strange reason lol
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2009 22:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! You can't do that! You just can't do that to us! Kagome IS NOT supposed to be with Kouga... It's InuYasha who is her MAN! Damn the human and his weakened flesh. *sniff* And I want Inu and Kagome to be together too. Now Kagome goes and fucks it all up by letting herself get all wrapped up in Kouga... It is the bastard Kouga right... and not InuYasha! AAAARRRGH! The suspense is killin' me! Hurry and update would ya? ^_^
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Reviewed By: EarthSong [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2009 20:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Amazing! Im literally at the edge of my seat! Can't wait for the next one! keep'em coming!
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Title: Chap 53
Reviewed By: EliFanel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2009 19:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are right I will scream... but not flaming. THIS WAS GREAT!... one of the best… :D Thanks for this fast update and really... we are all waiting for the next update... anxiously........ seriously!... You are mean... LOL ;)
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Reviewed By: lostgirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2009 10:08 PDT
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amazing! again, with the cliff hangers! still, another great chapter. keep it up!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2009 05:42 PDT
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the last two chapters were awesome. I was a bit behind. She has to be kissing Inu... I could not imagine he lack of faith and love in Inu. If she can give into Kouga like that then her feelings for Inu can not be true and real. I don't cake how pissed and confused she is. And who is throwing the furniture around? But damn it was some good writing.
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Reviewed By: thelambtohislion On: June 15, 2009 22:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pshhh. as if that could be anyone other than inuyasha...
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Reviewed By: thelambtohislion On: June 15, 2009 20:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kouga knows Caesar? Who knew? its a very nice addition, though.
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