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Reviewed By: Ravens_Ashs On: June 10, 2009 19:37 PDT
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This chapter was great...I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. I do have one question though. At the end of the last chapter you see Ayame at the shrine with Sota, but in this chapter she isn't there. What is the time placement between these 2 chapters? Keep up the great work;).
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Reviewed By: little_wierd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2009 17:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSomE!!! as usual, definately cant wait till the next chapter! I love that their so long and actually have to sit and read rather than a quick read! but keep going, you definately have a gift for leaving suspence at the end of every chapter!!i hope yura dies!! lol and koaga too! okay maybe not yura but definately koga! hes such a bitch xD. I really really cant wait till finally kagome and inuyasha meet again its gonna be AMAZING! update soon!
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 16:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING! Once again, you have outdone yourself and I am just too excited to hear that you're going to be updating often. But just one thing, was Inuyasha really willing to cheat on Kagome? I know that in the end he would have been repulsed by another female that wasn't her but for him to even consider it threw me for a loop. After what they both have been through I would have thought that he wouldn't give cheating a single thought, and plus what he did to get her back in the Silly of me... chapter, he should be the most devoted boyfriend ever, no? I'm sorry am I rambling,a anyway your story is still flawless and I am eagerly awaiting your next update!
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 14:42 PDT
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you know what? i think this is the best chapter that youve ever written...im not even joking! it was sooo goodXD this is my absolute fav=D expecially the scene with inuyasha, rin, and sesshoumaru! and that last line! omg loved it=D lol cant wait for the next chappy=D
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 14:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very entertaining! Thanks for sharing!
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 09:34 PDT
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poor inuyasha, he's loosing his mind. i loved this chapter.
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 07:43 PDT
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I can't wait for the next part! o_o dun dun duuunnn!!!
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: June 09, 2009 06:43 PDT
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Wow!! Great chapter!! Where to begin...hmm. I guess I'll start by the rage I felt towards Yuka's manipulation. Unless she had a gun to her head or a knife at her throat, I won't care what happens to her in the end. As for Kagome's mom, I'm going to wager a different guess...she's in love with someone new maybe? Inuyasha's demon being more pronounced is no shock, but I thought you captured the panic and anguish he felt amazingly. I can't wait to see where the story goes from here. It's really a great story!!!! Thanks for the update!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 02:33 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... there was alot happening there... what Yuka is doing is fishy... that stupid wolf is probly forcing her doing this... or probly telling her she can have anything she want if she made Kagome come out >.> those two are thinking about marriage?! kids these days are getting worst LOL but Kagome's mum got me puzzled... maybe shes sick, but not in a bad way sick... hmmmm... and someone's is getting cranky coz their mate isnt around XD but i gotta say, that was my fav bit! but when Inuyasha said "There's a voice in my head, Sesshomaru, and it's not mine." it makes me shiver somehow... but your toturing them both!!! make Inuyasha go get her and drag her off to the family holiday XD
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Reviewed By: Bre'Auna Kemp On: June 09, 2009 02:30 PDT
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i loved it.So yasha demon is comming out to play because it is lookin for Kagome. So they must be each outhers tru mates then. awwwwwwwww and can some one plz kill kouga
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 23:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Rubs palms* I'd say that it was just getting good, but this story has been "good" since the very beginning. But it's definitely building up to a very dramatic climax of sorts. I wasn't worried for a second when Inuyasha started thinking about having a quickie, because even if he wasn't already experiencing adverse effects from the touch of all women not his mate, in the end, he would just never be able to do that to Kagome. But now it looks like Sesshoumaru will be able to spread some light on the subject. I wonder what his reaction will be when he learns what his youki has been doing behind his back. And as for Yuka, wasn't she with Kouga the last time we saw her? I'd bet dollars to donuts that he's behind her inviting Kagome out to that lounge. The one thing that really has me scratching my head is Kagome's mom. At first I just thought that she was sensing that Kagome was holding back with Inuyasha, trying to get her to see for herself how deeply she truly does love the man, but Kagome's worry has me worried. IS something else going on with Mrs. H? Okay, she doesn't smell sick...so that's good at least. Guess I'll just have to wait and see. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: bigfanofiykag [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 21:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, Sorry I haven't written a review in a while. I just have not had the time or the space to read a story let alone write a review. Man, this story is really starting to get to me. I can't wait to see what happens next. What is that Yuka up to? What the hell is wrong with InuYasha and when the hell is Kagome going back to Tokyo? Hell, there's no way in hell I'd stay away from my man that long unless one of my family members was dying and so far all Kagome's been doing is stalling and partying. I actually feel sorry for poor InuYasha. Well, keep the chapters coming. Take care.
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 19:52 PDT
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It really did take you long enough jeez... And I'm so confused! But in a good way, I kinda think I have an idea about whats going on with Inu, and even with Kagomes mom, but I'm not sure... So you need to hurry, cause I'm curious... It was a great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 18:46 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I really hope that Sesshoumaru can FINALLY get Inuyasha to understand what's happening to him> His body and heart have obviously already acknowledged what Kagome truly is to him, even if his mind is still protesting. I can't wait to see what comes of the brothers little talk. Very good chapter.
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2009 14:59 PDT
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YOU ARE SUCH A BEAUTIFUL WRITER! Thank You for giving me something to read that exceeded my expectations of a good fic. I hope things are looking up for you (I'm not up to your latest updated chapter, so I don't know if things have gotten any better. I'm very sorry for what has happened and trust me, I know exactlly what you're going through just like many others do. Luckily things do pass and we heal as time goes on. Just hang in there!) Once again, this is an amazing fic, thankyou so much for writing it. I just had to take a break from it to tell you how great it is, buut I am off to continue reading.
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