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Title: WHO WAS TAHT PERSON KAGOME WAS CRYING ON?
Reviewed By: Lilsweetpea On: December 03, 2008 15:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MadMistress65 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 10:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations on your win! You deserve it. This is an awesome fic. Poor Sango. Poor Miroku. Poor InuYasha. Poor Kagome. *sniffles* Waiting on bated breath for the next update.
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Title: Damn
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 22:04 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I guess I could understand Miroku blowin steam that way but I hope he feels like bad for it afterword. and if that mofo holding Kagome is Kouga I hope Inuyasha over reactes...yea yea beat up kouga that sounds nice, real nice
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 21:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I woldn't say Inuyasha put his foot in his mouth...he put his whole leg in his mouth! If I was sango I'd beat the ever loving crap out of him for saying what he said to kagome! Nobody should wish that on someone else. As for koga...Oh how I hate you're koga! I love you're story so much!
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Reviewed By: nicc85 On: December 02, 2008 21:48 PST
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i definitely agree that the "sesshoumaru's loins" line was so funny, and i guess i'm not the only person whose wondering if kagome ran into a random guy or if it's kouga. there's so much suspense... lol. it has me wondering if inuyasha is going to go full demon right there in the hospital. great chapter! : )
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Title: Amazing...
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 18:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I second everything InuGoddess715 just said, and would also like to add that I am officially on pins and needles to see what happens next. On a side note, I'd like to complement you on your choice and use of the song included. A full-fledged song-fic moment was not truly needed, so I think you included just the right amount of lyrics, and although I haven't actually heard that song in what seems like forever, I am familiar with it, and found myself "feeling" it just how Kagome must have. Nicely done.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 16:59 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL chapter. You did a terrific job with the angst here, particularly in the scene with Kagome and Miroku. Miroku is a kind man.....but what must it to do him to realize (as a gynecologist) that he and his wife will likely never be able to have children even though they both wanted a big family? And not only that but that Sango was raped for trying to protect, not herself but her friend Kagome....a friend who had not returned any of his wife's calls or come to see her until today. I don't care how kind a man he is...you can definitely understand why he would be BITTER about all that. None of this was Kagome's fault; the victims of stalkers are never to blame for what psychos do. But anyone with a heart could understand the pain and anger he must be feeling. His kind heart will torture him for the things he said in anger...but I doubt that anyone will really blame him for it. Except for maybe Inuyasha...later. And speaking of Inuyasha...you did a great job with the angst from that situation as well. Kagome's torment and Inuyasha's was on full display here. And the silver lining of all this is that Inuyasha is no longer blind or in denial about his feelings for Kagome. He KNOWS he loves her. But he has a lot of work cut out for him to fix things. I just hope that he will get the chance soon...and that Kagome isn't already in trouble. I REALLY hope that guy she's crying on is not an enemy. I can't wait to find out. This is probably my favorite chapter so far. It was TERRIFIC.
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Reviewed By: xyanblue On: December 02, 2008 16:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that chapter was amazing but i cant belive miroku he was so mean to kagome and it eeally wasnt her fault i cant wait for the next chapter to see what inuyasha will do please update soon
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: December 02, 2008 15:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reeeeeaaaally wasn't expecting one so soon! But I'm not complaining :) And I wonder who is that guy that's about to have his ass handed to him! lol.
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Reviewed By: silverfeather [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 15:01 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg is miroku gonna die? is inuyasha gonna step in? are inu and kagome gonna get back together ah, so many questions...:P please update soon!
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [not logged on] On: December 02, 2008 14:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are so great. You really have a way of putting emotion into your writing...ugh! i NEEEEEEED to know who she's crying on! when you feel you want to let as know, update as soon as you can! :) thanks for gifting us with this story! you're wonderful :) update when you can. thanks.
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 14:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
congrats for winning 1st place on your story. you definitely deserved. and this chapter was off the walls! sooooooooo gooodddd! thanks!
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 12:01 PST
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o. m. g. o_____o Whoa!!
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Reviewed By: KM On: December 02, 2008 08:01 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap that was freaking amazing!!! So angsty, so much drama!!! I wonder what'll happen when Miroku's head clears...I wonder what InuYasha's going to do to that guy Kagome ran into. Porr schmuck was probalbly just visiting his grandmother and all of a sudden he's got a crying woman and a murderous hanyou on his case. Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: KM On: December 02, 2008 08:01 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap that was freaking amazing!!! So angsty, so much drama!!! I wonder what'll happen when Miroku's head clears...I wonder what InuYasha's going to do to that guy Kagome ran into. Porr schmuck was probalbly just visiting his grandmother and all of a sudden he's got a crying woman and a murderous hanyou on his case. Update soon!!!
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