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| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] | | Pages (77): [ « ‹ 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 › » ] | Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 19:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing chapter. LOL. Inuyasha was such a jealous butt when Kagome was going to name her dog after Ginta. I can feel lots of drama to come. I actually burnt my arm with the curling iron because I was so busy reading this chapter! Thanks for all your hard work. I know you're going through a hard time, but you'll pull through. I somehow did twice. Thanks again for all of the great work. This story definitely has potential!
| Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 19:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things r startin 2 heat up please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Ro0tin4kagome [nsi] On: August 11, 2008 00:11 PDT
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I have to say never in my life have i felt so disgusted and emotional when reading a fic. I wished i could jump in their and find a way to kick Kouga's ass. Because whatever Kikyou did to Inuyasha is like crumps compared to the shyt he did. GAHH!! im so aangry. Oh and another thing thanks to your wonderful story [ that i just reread! WHOO!] YOu help me procrastinate on my PSY class 40 reports due in the beginning of term. lol So thanks. =D
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 09:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry sweetheart for all the things that are happening to you! Really sorry, if you need to talk just send me an e-mail, ok?! ::huggggss:: Now, loved this chapter although is so... cruel. Yep, never liked Kouga... and that was the manga, now really want to fry him!!! Poor Kagome, good for her that Inuyasha is there although don't know how much is he going to tell her or how will she react if he does or if he doesn't when she finds out. LOL, you just love to put them in the worst scenarios, ne? But, somehow know that -at the end- things will be all right, right? :crickers: errr... right? LOL Great job sweetie, this chapter flowed wonderfully -as usual- but has this sort of desperation in it, maybe because how Inu and Ginta were feeling, that you did expressed it in this piece so vividly that was able to actually feel their despair. Excellent job!!! Thanks for the update!!! :D
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 09:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry sweetheart for all the things that are happening to you! Really sorry, if you need to talk just send me an e-mail, ok?! ::huggggss:: Now, loved this chapter although is so... cruel. Yep, never liked Kouga... and that was the manga, now really want to fry him!!! Poor Kagome, good for her that Inuyasha is there although don't know how much is he going to tell her or how will she react if he does or if he doesn't when she finds out. LOL, you just love to put them in the worst scenarios, ne? But, somehow know that -at the end- things will be all right, right? :crickers: errr... right? LOL Great job sweetie, this chapter flowed wonderfully -as usual- but has this sort of desperation in it, maybe because how Inu and Ginta were feeling, that you did expressed it in this piece so vividly that was able to actually feel their despair. Excellent job!!! Thanks for the update!!! :D
| Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 07:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im sorry I didn't reply as quickly as you updated..... But now Im just happy that I read the two last chapters that are up.... Im sorry for your grandmother and know exactly how you must feel... I been through that so many times... And it still hurts today but not as much....I just hope you talk to some one about it than just keep it inside, in your mind... Of course Im not good at that, talking it out but I had my way... Well the story was just fantastic and you were right, I dislike Koga so much I just hope he suffers in this story... So keep it up and updated soon... Peace....
| Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 13:46 PDT
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Oh my, suspense and terror filled chapter there. Lovely installment, left me gripping my seat rather badly, and I'll say, I've never much liked Kouga, and the one in your fanfic has just descended to the bottom of the garbage pile. And *headdesk* Damnit, Inuyasha, you didn't hear it till the end! Damnit all, now he doesn't know what very real danger Kags is in... although I'm sure he figured it out. If one of THEM is here, then Kouga is sure to follow close behind... and I wonder if Inuyasha will finally get off his behind and tell Kagome frankly that he wishes to be the one she dates. It would keep her more protected in his mind, so the very real situation and the need to keep her safe might just over-rule his relationship-shy mentality. Somehow, it feels like them being united is really important from now on... even an important businessman and a rather good lawyer don't have much protection against a mafia boss. *shudders* this doesn't look good at all.
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 04:15 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i feel even more sorry for Kagome T_T and dont worry, ive lost lot of people this year.. a house fire and a car acciedent.. but if you needed some1 to talk, ill be right here :) *gives hugs*
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 03:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you Ginta for telling some. And yea for inuyasha and Kagome's blossoming relationship. That was very sad what kouga did to kagome. please don't let him touch.... he basicly had her raped. and if a man ever did that to me his dick will be shoved up his ass and will never be able to come out unless he had some surgery.How old is Souta again? Is inuyasha and Kagome soulmates like Souta and Nola?
| Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 10:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! I'm such an ass! I completely bypassed the A/N! My condolences. Sorry. I know it's hard losing someone you love and I know that if I were to ever lose my grandmother(who also raised me) I would be devastated. So would the rest of my family. I hope you and your family are dealing okay and wish you nothing but the best to come. Just remember that death is a natural part of life and it's never anyone's fault, especially not your own. And I'm sure the people you love would want you to be happy so the best thing you can to honor their memory is to love, laugh, and live each day to the fullest. I Hope you feel better and that this helped. :/ ~Amber
| Reviewed By: fudge On: August 08, 2008 09:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to take a wild guess and say that they are finally going to move on to the relationship part(crosses fingers). What can I say besides good as always! keep up the wonderful work!! update soon!
| Reviewed By: Caree On: August 08, 2008 08:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ginta finally did the right thing. good for him. i love this story everything moves at such a good pace . it's amazing really, please keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: xxsilentbeautyxx@hotmail.com On: August 08, 2008 07:02 PDT
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Well...I completely loved the chapter. That was simply horrendous what Kouga did to Kagome...but it actually fits perfect for the story. That would be about the worst thing that could happen to someone, but the only thing that could make her so broken...I cannot wait for the next chapter and how Inuyasha explains why he's there and why his eyes are red.
| Reviewed By: xxsilentbeautyxx@hotmail.com On: August 08, 2008 06:42 PDT
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I haven't even read your chapter yet...just your note at the top. I just wanted to say that I'm sorry you've had so much going on. I'm sorry that you have had to experience so many deaths in such a short time. I'm sorry that your Grandma died; I don't know what you're going through, but I do know that I can not imgaine losing my Grandpa, and yet, I know I will soon. Sometimes people don't suffer because He doesn't think they're worthy...sometimes people suffer to help others learn(its a horrible way, but its the only way some people learn). Sometimes, people just need to die. I know that sounds awful, and I'm not going to apoligize. Sometimes, they will be in more pain if He had let them live. I'm sure you realize that, but sometimes I know it's hard not to think its all your fault, all because of something you did...cause I feel that way alot. Also, it's not always the Almighty making you suffer...sometimes, its Lucifer (I don't know if you read the bible much, but I recommend the book of Job to learn about that). The Almighty will not give you more than you can handle...sometimes it may seem like you can't handle it...but you are. And to see that your still writing says alot. I will keep you in my prayers, that you see the good in what is happening; that you take it all in stride and glorify the Almighty even more through it all; and that you know that the Almighty doesn't want you to hurt, but sometimes, some things have to happen.
| Reviewed By: Silent Reader On: August 08, 2008 03:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, Well I've been reading your fic since I found it a couple months ago and it is frankly fantastic. I look forward to reading all the time. It's well written and damn exciting. Your cliff hangers are terrible, they make me check the site all too frequently hoping you've posted something. I choose to leave a review this time due to your annoucement about your grandmother. My dad suffered the exact same loss a 4 years ago and I have seen how painful it can be. He still mourns her. I just wanted to offer my condolances and encourage you to continue your work for, you have a talent (at least in my opinion as I'm a very picky reader. Thanks for the new chapter and I look forward to the next.
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