| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 19:35 PST
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Thank you very much for the wonderful update. The date at the park was so heartfelt. I can see them growing closer together..... Keep up the terrific work. Good Luck with the computer issues. YOU ROCK!
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Title: WOW HEAVY CHAPTER
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 18:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow heavy chapter ,really a lot of insight in to both of them!!!! Even if Kagome was doing most of the talking right at the end .... I also liked the location of there first, undate or none date DATE!!!! Some times getting to know someone in an informal or casual setting is much less stressful on both party's,,,, Yashas opening up about his mom shows just how relaxed he is around her even if he doesn't know it yet,,,, And Kagomes little speech at the end almost screams look I think I could really get to like you but I've been hurt very badly so please go slow.... Or maybe I'm reading to much into it... But the fact that she told him speaks for its self!!!! But alass only time and more UPDATES WILL TELL,,, SORRY BUT HERE COMES THE BAD PUN "WRITE ON" I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: February 03, 2008 16:47 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*lol @ 'Miss Piggy'* That was very funny. Awww to their first date too. I can't wait to see more. :)
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Reviewed By: xyanblue On: February 03, 2008 14:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!!!!!!!!! they finally went on a date i hope they go on another one soon please update
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 14:07 PST
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GAH!!! it ended way too fast!!! but it was great nonetheless. i'm totally excited to read your next chapters! you definitely are a hard worker! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 13:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon it's great that their getting to know each other well!!!
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 12:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bittersweet... I love so much your stories and this one in particular!! The jokes, the fights and the stories behind the story. The pieces they let the other know, their inner turmoil. The want to and the denial, the fear of love and been loved, the scars and all the dancing around each other, avoiding but wanting to reach. Really beautiful, so natural, so true LOL. Excellent job!!! ::hugs:: I'm sorry to hear that you still have "technical" problems, but it's okay as long as you are fine, the computer will come so don't worry... just keep writing your ideas on paper, you are not allow to lose any of those amazing creations you have!! Hopefully, everything will be okay!!! Thank you very much for this great chapter, to add to your final words... sometimes what you need is just round the corner! Hopefully they wont get to the part of "You know what you have when you lose it"... Although, with you plotting... don't know, just don't know... LOL Great job!!! Thanks for sharing!!!
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Reviewed By: SummerNightsxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 12:31 PST
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Amazing as usual. Sorry to hear about you technical difficulties and hope that they can be sorted out soon cause I love this fic! XD
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 11:28 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter.....but, MAN, those two are stubborn. They are already sprung....but fighting it like hell. Obviously, they need more time; they are just too gun shy to fall easily. But, I am enjoying this story so much.....no complaints here!
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Reviewed By: Hawaiian_stoner [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 00:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story I hope you update soon I cant wait to see what happens.
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Title: Waiting impatiently...
Reviewed By: crimson fang On: January 31, 2008 13:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story so far!!! Such great up and down chemistry & what-not between inuyasha and kagome... i love it! Im not looking forward to how kouga is mostlikely going to reopen kagomes wounds... i hope things grow alot stronger between kagome and inuyasha! Anyways, until next time i guess...UPDATE SOON!!! (im just a little impatient lol)
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 14:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man your story is so good sorry that i havn't been reviewing lately my bad.......but keep up the good work
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Title: GREETINGS FROM THE UNDERWORLD
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 23:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW WOW WOW THIS IS A GREAT STORY!!!! WE WERE JUST LOOKING FOR SOMETHING TO READ WHILE KEEPING THE FIRES HOT AND FOUND THIS STORY AND AFTER READING STRAIGHT THROUGH 23 CHAPTERS WE HAVE DEEMED IT GOOD ENOUGH TO ALLOW YOU TO BE ADDED TO THE FAVORITES LIST OF THE LORDS OF THE UNDER WORLD!!!! DO NOT TAKE THIS HONOR LIGHTLY.... FOR I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS, WHOSE ONLY PURPOSE IS TO DRIVE SLOW UPDATERS AND SHORT CHAPTER WRITERS BACK TO THE COMPUTER TO UPDATE. They are relentless in there attacks They will bark, growl and nip at your ankles until an Update is posted!!!! After which they will transform Back in to the cute little YORKIES they usually are And want to play with you for a couple of hours Before coming home!!!! .... SO DON;T KEEP ME WAITING TO LONG !!! STORY IS REALLY GOOD LOVE THE INTERACTION BETWEEN YASHA AND KAGS,,,, BOTH SO AFRAID OF THERE OWN FEELINGS!!!! BOTH TRYING TO HIDE THERE OWN PAIN!!!! I WONDER IF SESSH WOULD REALLY HAVE STOOPED THAT LOW???? OR COULD HE SEE WHAT WAS RIGHT IN FRONT OF YASHAS EYES ALL . ALONG,,, MAYBE I'M READING TO MUCH INTO IT ,BUT IT SEEMS TO FIT,,, WELL ALMOST ANYWAY.... WITH WOLF BOY COMING BACK IN THE PICTURE COULD THERE BE A ROLE REVERSAL FOR OUR FAVORITE COUPLE???? ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS
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Reviewed By: inuyashalover913 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 18:39 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWHH, it was so short. :( Oh well, it really did make my day. Can't wait for the next update, keep up the good work!:)
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 12:12 PST
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*SQUEE* XD XDDD you rock.
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