| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 19:34 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont know if I mentioned just how much I love this story. Im so addicted to it. I wouldnt do anything else but pay attention to the screen during the time I was reading it. Remembering that i have to call back some people. lol But yes, this story is most definitly a winner in my eyes. I think this is gonna be gathering a lot of awards. And YES they got much closer. Which makes my heart that much better compared to what it was earlier. Also I loved how you didnt rush their meeting. I always hated that. Made it less realistic. And it also seems that the slime is starting to come up. So what first is Kouga than is the rat Kikyou. The two Killers. Oh well this is long enough. I hope you update soon. Because this newly favorited story is some thing I just have to know how it ends.
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 18:02 PST
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When you mean get our hopes up for this lovely and convient trip to maui. Yo mean they wont get any where closer. Darn shucks. Hey I thought this story was complete I guess i isnt. But thats okay. Im not going anywhere. lol =D
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 15:46 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Whoa. WEll i usually wait til the end to review on completed stories but I couldnt help my self this time I completely am in love with this story. You say that these characters are OOC but to me they are right on the dot. Come on if they were in the feudal time maybe they would be out of it. But its modern time so it fits. ANd Sango..whoa..come on you know she'll turn in to a sex feind a while after she was with Miroku. Come on. Miroku got that charm. lol But still I love this story. ANd you have doen such a good job with it. SO far I rad that is. But I believe in the end it will still be one of the best I have read. =D
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Reviewed By: av On: December 15, 2007 08:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was wondering when kouga was going to make an appearance. another awesome chapter that leaves me wanting for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 18:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story keep up the good work plz.
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Title: omg!
Reviewed By: inuyashalover913 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 13:43 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Deng, Kouga's back. What a turn of events! OMG this chapter was great! I cannot wait 'til the next one. Great work:)
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Reviewed By: shutup...please On: December 02, 2007 23:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story has me on edge! i keep having to remind myself that Kouga or Kikyou are not real! please keep writing this story and others, i can't wait until the next chapter. My condolences on the broken laptop, hopefully things will turn out okay. well talk to you soon i will start leaving comments on all the updated chapters that you write from here on out.
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Reviewed By: lostgirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 22:45 PST
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finally! i have been waiting on pins and needles to see what would come next. really great. please write again soon!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 nsi On: December 02, 2007 19:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh Oh. Kouga's back. Not good. Really well written. I hope Inu and Kagome get closer.
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 19:15 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gosh... i fucking hate kouga!! booking his wife away for a month when he finds kagome? is he crazy? haha... anyways.. that was amazing!!!! let's pray that inuyasha will protect kagome from that bastard!!!! thanks for updating!!! it was so terribly amazing!!! way to go for souta for sticking up for his sister!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 13:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew that basturd would came back.... Can't believe he thinks that she might take his sorry ass back... (shakes head) He has a one track mind. Well anyways, hope you'll update whenever you get another laptop and keep it up. Peace.....
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 12:33 PST
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ooooo kouga's being an ass again. great chapter. i'm sorry about your laptop. makes me wonder when mine is going to die on me. update soon.
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Reviewed By: musicmuse18 On: December 02, 2007 11:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Can't wait for your next update. Keep uo the good work!
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 01:03 PST
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As the tryptophan coma wears off (otherwise known as Thanksgiving), it's time for people to make their wish lists. Let's see what do I want for xmas… hmmm… I know, a new chapter! Please update soon. Happy holidays!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 08:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo this is so awsome, man where do you get your ideas i get wtitters block constantly
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