| "Forbidden Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 02:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Good start, needs another chapter to it and alot more detail but other than that it was short and sweet. |
Reviewed By: woohoo On: April 27, 2002 07:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey that was pretty good. abit short but pretty cool. if ya dont mind i wouldnt mind reading another yuri lemon. not many people do yuris these days. great fic. keep it up!!! |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: August 31, 2001 12:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
ggood story need a bit more deatil , i found it a bit short but other wise very good story. are you going to write more to it |
