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Title: daydreams come true
Reviewed By: inutama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2009 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really like the story, I like the way you write about each person. keep up the good work and hope to see the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 17:37 CDT
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Ganju, you silly brave handsome man! Great chapter once again. Nice to see you're still alive and being more productive than me. ;)
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2009 03:55 CDT
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I vote for Yama's beard. It's make for great character development. ;)
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 14:46 CDT
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This is for only the first 5 ch., since that's as far as I've read. One word: genius. Poor Ichigo was so confused when he was getting molested,though just seconds later it was mutual.. poor Hime, stupid Kon. This is well-written, and not very ooc.
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Reviewed By: auronsgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I liked the story on whole, but I especially enjoyed Captain Hitsugaya's chapter. Your descriptions of him made me smile. I could just imagine him stumbling around, bumping into Matsumoto while Kyoraku tried to usher them into his quarters, giggling all the while. I loved it. :)
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 15:12 CDT
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The fun begins again. Awesome. And I thought you were going to leave this for dead. ;) Nice little bit of emotion with Rukia. Really could feel it. Nice job without being too over the top.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For all the difficult you had with writing this chapter I think this one is one of the better ones in this story. I really liked this one. Good job. Anyway I think you should do Zaraki next. Now that's a POV that would be interesting.
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Reviewed By: Deadberserker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 14:11 CDT
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Good chapter I think the reason you have so much trouble understanding Chad is because he is a minor character in the show that is both emotionally stable and quiet. Its hard to get a feel for his personality, that being said I think you did a good job given so little information I impressed. As for the next chapter its a little soon to be doing another Toshiro chapter. I would go for someone else for the next one. Sorry I don't have any suggestions but who ever it is I'll read and support this fic.
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Reviewed By: Deadberserker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 00:25 CDT
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Interesting chapter, Toshiro is an interesting character that you don't see worked with much. The funny thing is this seems completely plausible.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya know it would be interesting if you took a page out of Orionshadow's book with Toshiro. Now *that* would be interesting in the context of these shorts. Heh. Not that I'm encouraging you to, just thought it would intriguing. Keep going!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic continues to entertain. I love how you've now got Orihime conflicted about her feelings which is great. This chapter is up there with Tatsuki. Keep it comin'!
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 02:51 CDT
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aw...pairings not that unconventional...hmm. well kon could be next for all i care. as long as you cont. ill read and support this fic. ^-^v (mispeld it)LOL
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 02:50 CDT
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aw...pairings not that unconventional...hmm. well it kon could be next for all i care. as long as you cont. ill read and support this fic. ^-^v
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 03:59 CST
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hmmm...tatsuki...so chads next?
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Title: giant cockroaches. lol. funny
Reviewed By: kiteEatingTree [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 04:16 CST
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^-^...not so rushed? i cant even concentrate on the long chichats! and you hinting on something? what was ikaku talking about...
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