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Reviewed By: LexiPlexi On: August 21, 2007 04:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is so much fun to read. I love that it's in the Inuyasha's perspective, and also that you actually capture his attitude and personality very well in his story-telling. I enjoy it so much because there are so few stories where they're told in first-person (well anyway) and also that it's Inuyasha telling it, which is rare too. Such fantastic and vivid detail, but at the same time tasteful. You can really feel the passion between the two and you just wanna hear more and more! Please keep writing more for this story and many other stories as well! You're style is definitely one of my favorites! =3
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: August 21, 2007 02:05 EDT
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Aww another kid, and another 9 months of mood swings. As usual this new chapter of yours was great. And I cannot wait for the next installment, hopefully I won't have to find you and smack you around to get it.
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Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 18:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my favorite chapter by far! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: August 20, 2007 17:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet chapter. Very well written. It's funny how Kagome let him get away with so much since it was his birthday.
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 14:16 EDT
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Absolutely fabulous! The unique perspective gets me. But you know what I like most about this? There's such a depth of emotion, augmented by perfectly horny male thoughts, hidden under a layer of bluster. Do males really think this way, and just hide it? I have to know. I mean, I know they are drawn like magnets to T & A; my own hoozba is no exception, but most of the time he leaves the impression that he's contemplating baseball or taxes. Is it all a charade because men don't want us to know they are thinking so-called "wussy" thoughts? Anyway, I think it is very realistic the way you portray those emotions as fleeting, but overpowering when they hit. Very well done!
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 13:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are very talented. Keep up the terrific work!
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Reviewed By: jaybby On: August 20, 2007 12:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your writing. The relationship between Kags &Inu is so ideal, it's the kind of relationship I hope to have later in life. Great job! Please update soon. (=
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 11:20 EDT
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Yet another great chapter. I really loved how you presented Kagome being pregnant again where you alluded on previous chapters, clearly showing how Inuyasha has matured and developed over the years. And yet another - no, TWO hot lemon scenes where two people acctually gets off of one another and not of what they do or are dressed in. Rare these days and I love it even more because of that. If reviews are needed for more chapter I will gladly review two times a day for a year if needed be. I'll be reading you!
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Title: Only you...
Reviewed By: Chrissy07 On: August 20, 2007 10:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just now realized that one could review without an MM account. Had I known earlier I would've told you how much i love this much sooner!! Someone (Steph) already described what's so great about this story to a tee.I just thought that I should let you know I felt the same way. Inuyasha's intense emotional ponderings are more than moving, and the doubt and fear he lives with despite the joy that surrounds him is almost heart-wrenching. These are exactly the things that I imagine would be going on in his mind. I love the ephemeral way in which he views life, and the emotional spectrum this story visits is just divine. I,too, have to truly thank you for expressing this so beautifully. Again, Steph covered pretty much everything that needed to be said. But I absolutely wait with baited breath until the next time we can catch another glimpse into InuYasha's achingly happy heart.
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Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 03:48 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was absolutely adorable. I love the characterizations, the sex (of course), and the family aspect. The family aspect was my favorite, and I can just picture little Kai's cute baby-ness. Very realistic with the pregnant mood swings, funny with the denial of sex after birth. Clever and amusing; I very much enjoyed this! -- PS: Kagome in a leather SM outfit was tres sexy.
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Reviewed By: Stephabigfan On: August 05, 2007 19:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definately one of my favourite stories in the entire Inuyasha category. I love the way you write Inuyasha's point of view. The intensity of his emotions, his love toward his wife and now his son. The sex scenes are the best of the entire category, and trust me i have read almost every story here, and you are the only one that can write not only a wonderfully done sex scene, but also a scene that spills Inuyasha's love for Kagome in every sentense. Your characters are perfect, and you have nailed Inuyasha with undescribable presision. I wish i had just the exact words to describe how enjoyable this story is, but unfortunately i don't. All i can tell you is thank you for taking the time and thank you for inviting me into a world where even though things are not cheesy romantic and not always perfect, they still make it through with a wonderful marriage. You have taken teh characters one step further into the ralm of true emotions and experiences. Thank you for making Inuyasha justice and showing off your incredible talent. I look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: inux3kagome4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 22:40 EDT
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that was fan-fucking-tastic ... I hardly review stories but this deserves more than a review ... it needs a dang award
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Reviewed By: jessirawr On: July 14, 2007 04:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Two words: wow &more. [=
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Reviewed By: lovelyflip08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 16:06 EDT
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AWWWW!!!! the third one shot was hecka cute!!!!! anyways...hope that you'll continue with these one shots! and can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: July 11, 2007 03:07 EDT
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Oh I just love these chapters. It's always such a treat when a new one pops up.
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