| "Death Brings New Life" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: ?????????????
Reviewed By: narufreak1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 16:34 CST
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what happens!im lost..you really should work on that!sure prvey sage finds naruto but dose he kill the cold hearted snack?dose he go back to the village?dose sakura kill herself before he dose?just kiddig=]will it be a happy ending??
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 23:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is it the kyuubi transformed? i cant see ero-sennin just going up, smirking, almost laughing, asking naruto to explain himself >.>
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Reviewed By: texanatheart On: December 13, 2007 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! The pervert found Naruto (lol)?!? You have to update soon!!! PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 01:33 CST
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DUN DUN DUN DUUUUN DUNNNNNNNN! Yeah, the perverted bastard has arrived! Still, hwo long until your next real chapter update? Neh, I guess that's the usual question, just come out with it soon, okay? THis story is pretty decent, but months of delay between updates always sucks. Neh, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 23:37 CDT
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Thank you for updating kinda short but it was still an update anyways I love the story and for the pairring I do like Naruto/Hinata but I think it would be better if it was Naruto/Akane and keep her at 17 hell since you already have 6 chapters why change her age now and I think it would be cooler if he comes back to Konoha whenever that will be but have him come back with a girlfriend who is older than him lol but now I have a question how can he go back to Konoha they think he is dead and if he cmes back not dead wouldn`t he be a missing-nin and now the problem is Jiraiya found him so what will happen to the Kyuubi oh well please update whenever you can well I kinda hope it would be soon anyways whenever you can please update I miss reading your stories because it seems like nobody wants to update anymore and if they do they update these queer stories oh yah by the way how long has Naruto been gone I forgot
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Reviewed By: mimicv18 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
naruto/akane keep her age 17 more interesting that way.
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Title: Uber_Dude
Reviewed By: Uber_Dude [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 21:04 CDT
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i like this and the other one but since naruto is alive doesn't that mean the ummm eye thinky is gone?
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 15:30 CDT
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Thank you that was a good chapter hell I loved the part where Hinata yelled at that Stuck up bitch known as Sakura lol they should shun her for that not Hinata but Sakura and now Sasuke needs to be killed sorry I just hate him oh yeah I know you said you already have a weapon picked out but I just thought of another cool weapon and it is also from InuYasha it is the weapon the cross dresser from the Band of Seven it was a sword that when it was swung it kinda looked like a snake or a whip well in my opinion that would be a cool weapon he could use oh here is a question I am now wondering about will Naruto ever return to Konoha to let them know he isn`t really dead or will stay away from Konoha for good Iknow he is trainning to become even stronger so he can kill Orochimaru oh yeah I just remembered from reading this new chapter what is Jiraiya dead if so why now that sucks I thought Jiraiya was cool and funny bt if he is really dead then that really really suck oh well please update soon either one oh yeah I was going to ask what is the pairrings going to be in you other story but I remember it is going to be Naruto and Hinata will there be a parring in this story or not anyways keep up the good work and please update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 12:17 CDT
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Ok well you updated your other story now it is this stories turn or you could update the other one again either way both stories are good I just hope to read more of them soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 16:53 CDT
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So far I really like ths story that sucks you already have a weapon you are planning to use I was thinking of two types of weapons 1 was a kida of a long sword that can break off to form two swords that or if you watch the anime InuYasha the weapon Sango`s little brother uses not sure what the name of it is well that was the idea I was thinking of for a weapon and about how everybody reacts to the news of Naruto`s death I was kind a thinking of having Sakura make a rude comment and have everybody just go off on her something like that thats all I can think of for that but I have a question is what is up with Akane she wears the head protector of the sound village but wen Naruto told her he is a ninja from Konoda and she is fine with that but wouldn`t she kill him because they are enemies oh well PLEASE UPDATE BOTH OF YOUR STORIES PLEASE and well could you also make them alittle longer
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 03:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The idea of the kyuubi training Naruto an gettin back is great. The description of the characters was awesome, I was laughing by the two sqealing Uchiha fan girls. Please keep it on.
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Reviewed By: Saric [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 23:11 CDT
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good story hope to read more.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 03:28 CDT
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Hmmm, the malicious training of Kyuu-chan. This begins first, with use of chakra weights. Instead of using steel or lead weights, like what Lee uses, but using Naruto's chakra to create weights, both sealing off a part of Naruto's chakra at all times, and also increasing his Taijutsu at the same time. Also, a set of seals can remove this chakra weight in an extreme situation, but only then. Same basic deal as Lee removing his weights. Next, Kyuubi would teach Naruto the basics, and finer points of demonic seal techniques (I mean hey, he messed up the first demonic seal, he ought to get it right) as well as seal master level human sealing techniques (this way, in a year or two of training, is sealing abilities are on par, if not greater than Jiraiya). I think that Kyuubi would also punish Naruto for all the perverted jokes he's played over the years (NEVER USE OROIKE NO JUTSU EVER AGAIN!!! NOT MORE STUPID TECHNIQUES!!!!!) as well as all the stupid fox comments. Usually, I think this would result in teh weights being doubled. Also, Kyuubi should hve a training ethic like Anko (uses weapons and pain as effective teachers) but instead of using kunai and Shuriken, Kyuubi would use his/her Chakra to lash out and punish Naruto. Why use weapons, when they can be dodged or thrown back? Not very effective. Well, that's my ideas. Later then.
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Title: INUYOKIA87
Reviewed By: INUYOKIA87 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 23:05 CDT
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You know what I like Kyuubi. Its a good start please continue.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this. update soon.
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