Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: Sirona_Argante [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 19:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a really good story. Naomi reminds me of me. I'm introverted, athletic, and like to fight. Apparently I'm smart, because I get fairly good grades, and I grew up leading a (mostly) sheltered life. Naomi sounds like she's emotionally strong, and that's a really good characteristic for an OC to have. Keep up the good work! Your spelling and grammar is good, and I didn't see any mistakes.
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