| "Forgive Me" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Forgive me
Reviewed By: sparkling_dew On: September 30, 2007 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good poem. I loved the fact that, unlike the other authors who make Kikyou a bad girl / woman because of her behaviour, you make her character both sympathetic and pitiable woman. I loved it alot. Very few authors can delve into the inner workings of Kikyou's mind, an you're one of them. Please give me a reply at LJ, I'd love to hear from you. (lj id = sparkling_dew)
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Reviewed By: ladyfluffy of the western lands On: August 01, 2007 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
kikio sucks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Well Done!
Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thoroughly enjoyed this. Beautifully succinct, w/o needless flowery language, but verbally captivating, none-the-less. Bravo! I like when authors explore this element of Kikyo's psyche. She always seems so selfish and unapologetic for her actions, like she can do no wrong.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 05:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice
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Title: beautiful...
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. It was truly perfect. There is nothing to change in it. nothing. nothing at all. I felt is was sad, but true. Great work. You did beautifully. You hit all the right places in all the right spots. wonderful work.
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