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| "It all started out with a kiss" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Peacefrog [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm...i must say this story sounds intresting, but i don't wanna be a stick in the mud, but it sounds like it's already been done before, think hard and try to add something new and original to your story. But I adore thqat your doing a kagome/sesshomaru story, it's a challenge for some people. Anyways keep up the enthusiasm! update sooooonnnnn!!!
| Reviewed By: black flame kitt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 00:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
sesshomaru is a evil jerk. poor kagome but i really like this story please update soon
| Title: kagome one
Reviewed By: kagome one [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow good story keep it goin i got a good title for the last chapter here it goes ''battle to win kagomes heart sesshomaru vs. inuyasha vs. koga vs.naraku
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