| "The Thirteen Seals" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Random Luke [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The new chapters are coming along nicely. If I might make a couple suggestion, Rikimaru and Ako would probably be good together. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: suicune132 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story and as a couple suggestion my favourit asunaxnegi
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Reviewed By: Random Luke On: November 17, 2007 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very fun to read and it's a great idea to add the new character, Rikimaru. I hope you come back to this soon!
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