| "Kitsune no Hanabi" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Omake
Reviewed By: kaptin hippy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 10:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
So far, so good. I really liked the Omake. That would really make a great story.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 03:51 CDT
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How is everything going I hope you will be able to update soon because I cann`t wait to read more of this story oh well PLEASE UPDATE when every you can BUT I hope that is SOON
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 17:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story and I thought this new chapter was good until you did those {OMAKE} I was like why did you have to do that I am sorry to say but this is only in my opinion I think they were dumb anyways update soon or when ever you can so keep up the good work and lol please leave those {OMAKE} out unless if it deals with what is going on in the story ok and that is just my opinion is all
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 05:34 CDT
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So far I believe this will be a great story that is IF you are going to continue writing it hell this is the second story I read with Naruto and Hanabi and the other one it sees the author doesn`t want to get off his ass to update it I just hope you will actually update so PLEASE UPDATE THE STORY
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Reviewed By: noname z On: June 04, 2007 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great fic. i really like the idea. And that little scene and the end of chapter one (that threesome-thing) was perfect. Please update soon. I just have to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I definitely see potential here and await further installment eagerly.
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Reviewed By: fm waver On: April 15, 2007 19:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice story idea i cant wait for more hope u update soon this story has alot of potansal.
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 18:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
no one has really ever write a story on hanabi. nice undertaking my friend. two thumbs up.
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