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| "My Daughter's Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Spinner13 On: June 11, 2011 10:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww~ *melts a little* This is a really good look at Maes and what his family meant to him, and I was SO glad when you put in the bit about Ed and Al coming back to their own world. *Glares at the Conqueror of Shamballa movie* I hated that ending... the only good thing in that entire movie was the Scar/Lust suggestion... ahem. Off-topic, sorry. But I really love this fic, it's refreshing to read something so nicely written with family sweetness and straight relationships. (No offense to those who yaoi, but I find it frustrating that there's an overload of it.) Keep writing! | Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 12:34 EDT
Comment/Review:
Huh. The way to get to the end, through your own mapping of the outcome of the story (second closing of the gate) might not be true to the creator's vision for this series, but I gotta admit, this story is good stuff. And hey, occasionally, I like a little bit of fluff. Good stuff
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