| "A Quiet and Sleepless Night Before the Storm" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't say I really liked this. it wasn't that the ending was bad, but you could have put a little more feeling into it. You sort of just stated what was happening. Where was the angst? Where was the overwhealming feeling? And to be perfectly honest, I highly doubt InuYasha would have just let her die, no matter what she asked out him. You also had a lot of spelling mistakes. All in all, thumbs down, sorry.
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Reviewed By: LadyDarkness26 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that I truly loved this peice. I'm such a freakin girl . . . I'm sitting here begging myself not to cry. It was just . . . WOW. Thanks for the wonderful read. Catch ya later LadyDarkness26
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh that's so sad!!! :( :(
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Reviewed By: XxRuler_of_the_DarknessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 19:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sniff* I cried whrn I read this..But it was a good one-shot...Now If you will excuse me I'll go and sit in a corner and cry some more..*sniff* waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! ;-;
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