| "Hinata's Secret Life" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: concerned On: May 05, 2007 12:17 CDT
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will you PLEASE spell Byakugan CORRECTLY!
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 01:01 CDT
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Great chapter this story just keeps getting better and better keep it up
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Reviewed By: Tricia1224 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! Three chapters. I loved every word.
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Reviewed By: Tricia1224 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. Is this the end or will there be more. Did I mention that this is one of the best stories I have read in a long time?
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Reviewed By: gossaem [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good good! i like this. You do so well at making the story seem beleavable. hmmm... itachi AND sasuki on a killing spree... maybe it wouldnt be that bad...
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 00:12 CDT
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That was a cute thing for ranmen to on his parents hand's hands. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: gossaem [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love you. i love your story. squeeee so good. thank you for writing this *bows*
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: April 22, 2007 04:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMIFUCKINGGOD!!! THIS STORY IS THE SHIT!!!
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 02:13 CDT
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Wow,that was really emotional momment for hinata. I wonder what will be Naruto reaction be knowing thatthe kid he was about to fight is his son!!! This fic is really awesine and I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Ja Ne ^_*
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 23:48 CDT
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Oh no!!!! Run Narto your son is mad at you for making hinata pass out again!!! HAHAHAHA!!! That was funny, but why was iruka being mean to Ramen!!! The strory is totally awesome !! I can't wait to see the next chapter!!! ^_*
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Title: Keep it up
Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 02:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love stories like this keep it up man I just wish people would read mine. But, I love this story update fast.
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 23:49 CDT
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That was so funny I thought Itacht waas going to kill the head of the hyuuga too. I wonder what will happen next. Please keep writing this totally awesome fic!!!!
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Reviewed By: Michael22 On: April 19, 2007 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
like the story and looking forward to reading more.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: toaist_boy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 16:14 CDT
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i like your fic style, but maybe you could make it more obvious what the story is about and what it involves. I mean i love surprises as much as the next guy, but even though i enjoyed it i felt that it was a bit ambiguous. I hope i'm not coming on to strong and i only want to be as sugar coated as i can. Luv ya! keep writing!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm, I do like this story. Keep it up.
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