| "Hinata's Secret Life" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 04:11 CDT
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That was also a really good chapter and it sucks to be those two guys and I hope everyting turns out ok for Hinata so have you thought of a name for there little girl I still vote for Miso since you already have Ramen and Miso does kinda sound like a females name lol anyways keep up the great work and PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: Darkspinesonic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay hiashi died finally great story keep going
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 15:10 CDT
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Wow that chapter kicked ass in my opinion I loved it and now Hinata is going to have another child cool so what gender will you make there second child to be I vote for a girl so Ramen has a little sister to help look after lol and you could call her Miso anyways I cann`t wait till you update again because I ove your story so update soon ad keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: Tricia1224 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 12:39 CDT
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Another great chapter. I love this story. For being geniuses those Hyuuga's are acting awfully stupid.
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Reviewed By: quatre n takato are te best [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!!!!!!!!!the best story ever plz add more! pretty plzzzzzzzzzzz
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 21:24 CDT
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YAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!! Congratulations Temari and Shikamaru!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next because it is just getting better and better !!!!! I Love This Fanfic!!!
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Title: The Blue Dragon
Reviewed By: Ryoten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 09:42 CDT
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This story is really good. I never thought that Itachi would settle down with someone.lol Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: wiwuno [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 08:13 CDT
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Awsome! I love this story. Please write more.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 14:17 CDT
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I love the story I just hope your going to update soon PLEASE
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Reviewed By: Zeke Marlin On: May 12, 2007 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read up to chapter 20, keep writing, if you end it here I will be so pissed, you gotta keep it going, and nice real name for Ramen, though I am curious of why you nicknamed him that..oh and about the 9/10 for spelling and grammer, just noticed some mistakes, but that is not what matters, the story is great!!!!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 01:01 CDT
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I thought that chapter was very very good well one good thing is the Hyuuga clan didn`t show up and I thought Hinata`s sister was going to be there oh well please update soo and keep up the good work
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: Tricia1224 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet end to this chapter. I am sad for Naruto "losing" Kyuubi. There seem to be definate problems brewing with the Hyuuga clan. I have lots of questions that will hopefully be answered in future chapters. As always this is a great chapter. This is the only story like this I have seen. Great plot and evokes the imagination.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 15:38 CDT
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I finally read all the chapters you have up so far and wow I really love the story s what is going to happen with Hinata`s sister now that her curse seal has been removed will they take her in or did Neji already done that oh well please update soon and keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 23:00 CDT
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So far what I read I love the story the only thing that is confussing me is there ages how are they like how old were they when Hinata went on her mission and how old was Naruto when he became Chuunin because in the chapter where Naruto was talking to Kakashi it sounded like he was twenty years old when he finally became chuunin so please e-mail me or something because I am very very confussed that and Ramen is only 7 yrs old he is super strong hell the way it kinda sonded like he is way way stronger than Naruto oh well I really do love this story and I cann`t wait to read more
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Reviewed By: suicne132 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only thing i have to say are byakugan, jutsu i cant stand reading those other thing but this is only my personal opinion so keep on writing i want MORE *laughter of a maniac*
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