| "Hinata's Secret Life" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: toaist_boy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 16:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like your fic style, but maybe you could make it more obvious what the story is about and what it involves. I mean i love surprises as much as the next guy, but even though i enjoyed it i felt that it was a bit ambiguous. I hope i'm not coming on to strong and i only want to be as sugar coated as i can. Luv ya! keep writing!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm, I do like this story. Keep it up.
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