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| "Seven Deadly Nins" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Catchy I like your style though they are no longer non related except gluttony of course. I am guessing Sloth will be Shikamaru. I can imagine him saying something like I have always love you from afar but I am to lazy to do anything about it. Greed will be hard for Kiba and Shino do not fill the role Naruto would but that will be hard but I will be eager to read it.
| Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 13:19 CDT
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Chapter 4: I couldn't like this one as much, mainly because I am a devote NejiTen follower... Er, somewhat... But, anyway, it was well written, and longer than your others, especially the first. I suppose your dislike of SasuSaku had something to do with the length of it?
| Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 13:14 CDT
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Chapter 3: I like Lee as well... I was always a bit disappointed that he had to like Sakura, because I always thought that Sakura and Sasuke would end up together (mostly because she's pink and he's black, and they're both main characters, and I though - still think - that Naruto ends up with Hinata). I always wished that there would be more kunoichi, or just more girls in general, so that there wouldn't have to be so many threesomes and/or characters left alone...
| Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 13:10 CDT
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Chapter 2: At the beginning of the series, I would have agreed with you - Sakura was extremely shallow, and saw nothing but her dear Sasuke-kun. However, I think that, especially in Shippuden, she has definitely grown out of it. She's not cruel, she's not ignorant - she was just a bit blind. And I think she learned to see under Tsunade's teaching.
| Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 13:08 CDT
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Chapter 1: There is a line, about the fifth from the bottom, that I believe contains an error. But I'm not sure - maybe mediaminer messed it up. And I completely support SasuSaku *grins.* But your story is amazing, and I'm going to keep reading.
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Reviewed By: shattered-words [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 06:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that I am not the biggest Sakura fan, in fact, she's my least favorite character next to Deidara, but this was really good. I read Wrath and while it was a bit short, I liked it and made me want to read the next one. Gluttony was better and then Envy was awesome. Yes, Lee is envious of Neji and Sasuke, but he's awesome! I luv Lee, he's so cool! Anywho, what's a beta? I'll help you out if you like, when I'm not concentrating on my own fanfic. I'm a bit sick right now so all I can do is read cause it makes it hard to concentrate when you're sick. Anywho, great story and glad to be your first reviewer. Later.
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