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Reviewed By: Merlin8719 On: September 11, 2007 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Watch for missed words or repeated phrases used in consecutive sentences. Your writting style is awesome and I like the way you are portraying the story. This is still a great work and I am glad you updated. I can't wait for the next installment, I've always been a fan of kick butt Harry (Damien). Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: shadowdragon85 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 16:03 CDT
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hehe! Dumbles is an idiot!
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Reviewed By: Carscard [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 18:50 CDT
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Hello again! Well, it's good to know you're continuing this. I still like it so far but I got a question for you: Why did you name the snake "Bebedora"? Did you know Bebedora means female drinker in Spanish? Poor snake. Anyway, I still want to read more so I hope you continue this soon! Smile!! ^O^
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Reviewed By: Honebars On: July 01, 2007 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ I love your harry. I think you made an awesome power for him and the old coot won't know what hit him. (soo loving what you did with the eyes.) An I like the idea for Myst. age. I can't wait for your next update.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 03:07 CDT
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COOL, UPDATE!!! Plus, Harry is a decently powerful mutant and mage! AWESOME!!! Thanks for the update, I'll write a more extensive review soon. Later
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Reviewed By: quatre n takato are te best [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 14:01 CDT
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this is sooooooooooooooooooo cool!
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Reviewed By: Merlin8719 On: May 07, 2007 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story and I hope you continue it. I can't wait to see what happens when Harry meets Wizarding Britain. You have a good writting style and interesting way of showing imphatic stress on certain words. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Lynneay On: May 06, 2007 18:18 CDT
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I like the developing plot. It's the first I've read like it. Please continue writing and update soon.
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Reviewed By: xinxing On: May 05, 2007 17:46 CDT
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Hey I hope you can update soon!! xcyax
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Reviewed By: Moonwrath On: April 29, 2007 17:00 CDT
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Really enjoyed the story can't wait for you to update.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 04:08 CDT
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Nah, the reason most people don't bother to review is the big reason, "I'm too lazy to review, so why should I bother," It's something everyone who writes has to get used to. Still, I'm interested in seeing where the story goes, so don't give up just yet. Besides, Harry actually telling Dumbledore to shove off is amusing, even if it isn't Cannon. Oh well, I love the story, and I look forward to the updates. Stay safe, write more. Later
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Reviewed By: Chi Vayne [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 22:39 CDT
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Good start
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 00:29 CDT
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Not a bad start. Just update soon, I'll give you a definite thumbs up or down by chapter 3. It's like trying to judge a book by it's prologue; unless it's a Wheel of Time Book, you're not gonna really know what to think of it until chapter 3, 4 or 5. Still, I like this start (and the not so subtle, oh who the hell am I kidding, you practically yelled it out who Harry's parentage is) and I want to read more. So please, update soon. Good Harry Potter Fanfiction is sooo hard to find on Mediaminer.
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Reviewed By: INUYOKIA87 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 21:56 CDT
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it's pretty good please contiune
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Title: Carscard
Reviewed By: Carscard [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic seems quite interesting. I certaintly want to continue reading this fic. I've found it easy to read (of course English is not my main language so I don't think you can really use me as a measure stick). Please continue and smile! ^O^ PS. Greetings from Mexico!
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