| "Cloud (Demon Chaser)" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: LionHeart823 On: March 10, 2004 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hn. Whatever..look just update already.
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Reviewed By: Teko Windstar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2002 08:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am so sorry that you didn't like the story. I will make it longer, besides it is going to have a lot of chapters. And school is over so I can right almost anytime now. |
Reviewed By: Tiger5913 On: June 10, 2002 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
A little too short, my friend. I love Cloud/Aeris fics though, so I went a little easier on you. ^_~ Hope to see the NC-17 part soon, hehe. |
Reviewed By: Chrono Cross On: June 20, 2002 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(evil Chrono)CLOUD!!NOOOOOO!!HOW COULD YOU!?YOU!YOU!URHHHHH!!(innocent Chrono)It's alright, k?(evil Chrono)[bawling]YOU, YOU'RE MEAN!!!I HATE ARIES!!!SO CLOUD SHOULDN'T HAVE KILLED HIMSELF!!IT'S NOT FAIR!!!ARIES WAS STUPID ENOUGH TO STAY WHERE SHE WAS!!!(innocent Chrono)I know you do.It was a good fic anyway!Bye!(evil
Chrono)[still bawling](innocent Chrono)It's alright!Geez!He didn't really die! |
