| "They need you" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Title: Good story
Reviewed By: aoife7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2009 00:14 CDT
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I just wanted to let you know that I thought you were writing a very good story. When I first started to read it I realized that someone had written it who did not speak english as their first language, but that did not make me want to stop reading. I see that you have not updated the story in some time, and if that is because you don't want to that is fine, but if it is because you don't think your writing is good enough I would like to ask you to reconsider. I loved your story and would like to find out what happens. If you do continue with the story I would be grateful if you could email me at: April.Chrestenson@gmail.com Thanks!!!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 21:28 CST
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this is a great story, although i do see what you mean about it needing editing. i hope to read alot more soon. my suggestion is that you spend half and hour once or twice a week editing if you can. however please write more chapters even if you dont edit.
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Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 23:20 CST
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I think that you are doing really well for someone who is trying to write in a foreign language. Many people do not realize that there are some who are not native English-speakers who post stories on these sites, and are somewhat critical as a result. I have noticed a difference between the beginning chapters and the most recent ones, which shows improvement. Please do not let this put you off from trying to finish this story. I think you are showing great courage and tenacity in posting this in English and I applaud you for it! Thank you for sharing this story with us all!! :D ~~Wiccan~~
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its not as bad as u say it is. i know there are a few_anime sweat drop- minor errors. but i can uh... understand it. i mean i makes mistakes all the time. just becuase u dont have alot of reviews mean nothin. its about how u express ur self and- ~sessh- rollos eyes- shut up already! ur kindness is killing me. ~ tba- its called encouragement. and 4 ur information theblackangel stands 4- ~ kag's gang- death we know! ~ rin- sesshomaru sama.... do u like kagome chan? ~ kagome- blush- ~ sessh-turns away. - that is a.... good question. miko! u answer the question! ~ kag- why me?! she asked u! ~ rin- tuggs on sessh's hatori and kagome's shirt- uh... ~ both- looks at her- yes? ~ rin- where do babies come from? ~ shippo- yeah kagome where? ~ kag-........ ~ sessh- flies off- ~ inu-.... ~ tba- 0_0 i heard nothing. ~ rin- do u know where babies come from? ~ miroku- ah. rin, shippo. this is a story we like to call: the birds and the bees. u see wen a mommy birdy and a daddy birdy love eachother they- ~ sango- gets on kirara and rides off- ~ kagome- hops on inu's back- ~ inu- runs away.- ~ tba- disappears in a cloud of black smoke- ~ miroku- as i was saying. when they love eachother they get married and live happily ever after. ~ rin+shippo- awwww. ~update soon!
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Reviewed By: Redi Hebi On: January 21, 2008 18:51 CST
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Your story is great and i loved the cell phone sences the only thing you need to work on is your grammer oh and your using oblige in the wrong sense!!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 14:36 CST
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OMFG UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN PLEEEEEEEAASEEEEEE i need to know what happens oh have a question in that dream kagome had with the eyes . did naraku make a link with kagome? oh wonderful story !!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: kiraka69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 00:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg!!! i wonder what's gonna happen next....
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Reviewed By: Tanneil [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 20:38 CST
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I lOve It So Much
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Reviewed By: kiraka69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwww.....what a *sniffle* touchingd reunion!!!i think i might of gotten a lil teary eyed there fore awhile....hope there is more soon it's a great story
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 14:33 CDT
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wow not many people like to review, anyway, good update do it again.
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 17:25 CDT
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good update, do it again
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 08:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
update
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 05:04 CDT
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update plz
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 13:26 CDT
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how long is no time to you?
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool! an update! plz update again, its a good story!
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