| "They need you" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 23:20 CST
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I think that you are doing really well for someone who is trying to write in a foreign language. Many people do not realize that there are some who are not native English-speakers who post stories on these sites, and are somewhat critical as a result. I have noticed a difference between the beginning chapters and the most recent ones, which shows improvement. Please do not let this put you off from trying to finish this story. I think you are showing great courage and tenacity in posting this in English and I applaud you for it! Thank you for sharing this story with us all!! :D ~~Wiccan~~
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its not as bad as u say it is. i know there are a few_anime sweat drop- minor errors. but i can uh... understand it. i mean i makes mistakes all the time. just becuase u dont have alot of reviews mean nothin. its about how u express ur self and- ~sessh- rollos eyes- shut up already! ur kindness is killing me. ~ tba- its called encouragement. and 4 ur information theblackangel stands 4- ~ kag's gang- death we know! ~ rin- sesshomaru sama.... do u like kagome chan? ~ kagome- blush- ~ sessh-turns away. - that is a.... good question. miko! u answer the question! ~ kag- why me?! she asked u! ~ rin- tuggs on sessh's hatori and kagome's shirt- uh... ~ both- looks at her- yes? ~ rin- where do babies come from? ~ shippo- yeah kagome where? ~ kag-........ ~ sessh- flies off- ~ inu-.... ~ tba- 0_0 i heard nothing. ~ rin- do u know where babies come from? ~ miroku- ah. rin, shippo. this is a story we like to call: the birds and the bees. u see wen a mommy birdy and a daddy birdy love eachother they- ~ sango- gets on kirara and rides off- ~ kagome- hops on inu's back- ~ inu- runs away.- ~ tba- disappears in a cloud of black smoke- ~ miroku- as i was saying. when they love eachother they get married and live happily ever after. ~ rin+shippo- awwww. ~update soon!
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Reviewed By: Redi Hebi On: January 21, 2008 18:51 CST
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Your story is great and i loved the cell phone sences the only thing you need to work on is your grammer oh and your using oblige in the wrong sense!!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 14:36 CST
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OMFG UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN PLEEEEEEEAASEEEEEE i need to know what happens oh have a question in that dream kagome had with the eyes . did naraku make a link with kagome? oh wonderful story !!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: kiraka69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 00:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg!!! i wonder what's gonna happen next....
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Reviewed By: Tanneil [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 20:38 CST
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I lOve It So Much
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Reviewed By: kiraka69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwww.....what a *sniffle* touchingd reunion!!!i think i might of gotten a lil teary eyed there fore awhile....hope there is more soon it's a great story
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 14:33 CDT
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wow not many people like to review, anyway, good update do it again.
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 17:25 CDT
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good update, do it again
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 08:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
update
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 05:04 CDT
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update plz
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 13:26 CDT
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how long is no time to you?
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool! an update! plz update again, its a good story!
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 18:36 CDT
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update plz, YAY INU IS DEAD!!! lol
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 09:27 CDT
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Inuyasha is DEAD!?! WTF!!!!!! NOOOOO!!!! HE BETTER COME BACK!!!
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