| "And A Daughter Makes 5" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: WeirdBluEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 23:46 CDT
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Thank U! i needed Ideas to keep the fights going longer. Knowing me, they'll have another fight, so thats a good idea, locking them out. Hmm..... |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 09:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
You could have let goku hit krillin and then tell him to take it out side too their is always that iffy part of those kinds of fights too. i'm only trying to help |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 09:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this storie and for the fights they do some times don't take long to get over with and make up is faster but thee are times that they could last a long time. one hint you could always have chichi and Videl lock their men out of the house for acouple of day's and go on from their. Just a sugestion but this fic s good as it stands to keep them coming. |
Reviewed By: WeirdBluEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2002 14:45 CDT
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I know! The fights dont last long at all, I juts cant seem to find something to keep the fights going! I hope u know what I mean! Maybe u have ideas to help?
I hope so! ^-~Lauren |
Reviewed By: MajinMe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2002 18:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
okay, but the conflicts/fights aren't long enough (settled too quickly). |
