| "Bloodlust: Purity" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: phoenixavatar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 02:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
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I am having a horribly hard time reading this one. The first was spell binding, EASY to read once through, captivating, just WOW! Aside from the characters I swear two different people wrote the Bloodlust stories. I find more power in the word 'mate' because Bloodlust shaped that term (through the content of the story rather than excessive description) so well that it seems to be more powerful than 'love'. Everything in Bloodlust 2 is an elongated description that I have to re-read, analyze, and decipher - not the content rich writing from BL-1. I will keep reading because I was so moved by the first story I didn't want it to end... I am still reading Bloodlust 2 but only because I am stil captivated by Bloodlust 1.
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 17:28 CDT
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This is getting more and more interesting...Its like a black hole pulling me in forcing me to read more and more...You so have to update soon...Im so cannot wait to see whats gonna happen next...I kinda figureed that Leiko was a Goddess or a powerful demon from the futer like Kagome.....I dont know what is gonna happen next, but I guess thatz what you are here for... U hav to update soon and I hope that Songo and Miroku are not biting off more than they can chew...Oh yea, is it just me or do the wolf demon girl and Kouga have somthing in common...Like her havin past memeriose...? COuld it be possible that she is Ayume????WEll update soon...iAdios!
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 17:07 CDT
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Okay, kinda confused again....What happened to her? Did the power consume her, or did she consume it??? But I cant wait until the battle starts, and I wonder what Elder will have to say on this situation, because I have a bad feeling that this Leiko person has some history with Midiroko or Elder, so please update soon....Lol, Im gonna go check again, maybe you updated again..LOl^_^
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 16:30 CDT
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Wow, that was fast!!! You updated as soon as I left that review, well I am about to start reading you update, Im so happy!!!!YAYYAYY!!! Your the best!
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 16:29 CDT
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Oh no!!! More evil Miko's...I think that the Lieko is gonna be more powerful than Sesshoumaru is thinking....Im so happy that Rin is finding love in a demon Lord...I really hope that there is a way to expand her life spand....This story is really comming along nicely.....Thankz for the update, and please update soon....You r such a great writer, cant wait for more^_^BYE@!!!
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 22:42 CDT
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Yay, thanks for the update.....This one was kinda weird though, I was all lost and confused for most of this chapter, it kinda made since, but then you threw me off again. Please tell me that it was supose to be confusing, or am I just slow......Hope you have a great summer, and update soon!!!@_@
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 16:19 CDT
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Yay, another update!! This was so sad, poor Kouga(pup Kouga, not wolf Kouga) I know it must be scary for him, and Kagome's powerful words full with motherly love and power brouoght Kouga back, I am touched (lol I'm listening to my immortal right now, what a conquenidence
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, another update to your wonderful creation. Please update soon so i can find out what is up with those three strange Miko's. I am not liking this Leiko person, if she turns out more powerful than Kagome, and wants to challenge her in a battle to send her to her time so she won't alter history anymore, I will die. It is just a vibe I'm getting. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!^_^
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Title: Chapter5
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting update soon. Can't wait to read how everything works out.
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Reviewed By: LovelyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read your original Bloodlust story and was completely blown away by your style of writing and the depth of your characters. I am very happy to see that you are keeping yourself to the same standard with this story. You have a knack for maintaining the basic concepts of the original characters and yet adapting them to your make them completely your own. I am very worried about what you are doing to poor Kouga, but then again you had me worried about Kagome a few times in the last one too and yet it was all worth it in the end. Thanks for taking the time to write and share such amazing work!
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Title: Bloodlust: Purity
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Your Wife Rae On: April 26, 2007 23:42 CDT
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NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! What are you doing oh wife of mine?! What is going on in that evil brain of yours? What happened to happiness... and light... and nakie Sess-chan?? UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!! you must you must you must!!! now now now now now! I want to know what's happening!
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Reviewed By: Your Wife Rae On: April 26, 2007 23:12 CDT
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EVIL!!!!! Evil evil wife!!! good story so far.. I can't wait to see where it's going... but EVIL!!! Poor Kogua! He is suffering from an oedipus complex major!!!!! No more suffering for Kogua! He needs a good life!
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