| "Genie In A Bottle" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Veggie Trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 00:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awe, aren't they cute!!! Whoa, Hawaii, wish I could go there without having to go over seas @.@. Anywayz, see ya next chappy!^^ |
Reviewed By: Mystic Sayian On: June 26, 2002 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
AWSOME!!! Oh, don't you have this on Fanfiction.net? This is Pan-Chan from FF. Loved it! Can't wait.... I LOVE PAN & TRUNKS GET TOGETHERS!! Like no one already knows that.... well loved the story. Can't wait till the wedding.... I'll have to get some tissues...heh.
MS |
Reviewed By: Veggie Trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2002 16:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whoa!!! Just got in the chat and already having problems, lol! This is coming along great! |
Reviewed By: Veggie Trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2002 16:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOL!! HAHA, Goku and his food! I tell ya, the man has a fettish! Good chapter by the way! |
Reviewed By: Veggie Trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2002 22:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHOA!!! They fused!!! Cool but then what would they be....??? She-man? LOL!!! HAHA! Oh...sorry...:$ |
Reviewed By: Veggie Trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2002 18:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awe!!!!!!!! That was so sweet! Just realized that was the first chap but that's alright, you got them fixed now! This was VERY nice!!!^^ |
Reviewed By: Veggie Trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2002 17:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOL!!! This was really funny! What the HECK was wrong with Vegeta at the end of that 1st chapter??? My Kami, he was acting like Goku! Lol, very nice! |
