| "Between Deception and Truth" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: I love this story
Reviewed By: RANMACAT On: June 09, 2012 01:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the ratings i gave your are becus this story is just that good. i read this win it frst cam out. but forgot ware it was and just found it a gen. this story has a grate plot and i love that Naruto gets pregnant to me he makes a grate mom in this story. i hope to see more soon. i'm not a good spler bot i hope you got what i tride te say. moew:) |
Title: Merry Christmas
Reviewed By: metaletemon27 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2010 05:16 EST
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Just wanted to say Merry Christmas, my lord. I've been a fan of yours for years (especially your Digimon fics) and I must say you've been a great inspiration. I've just written my first book that I intend to publish, and I have you to thank for showing me how entertaining a story could be. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. |
Title: DUUDE... AWESOME FIC!!!
Reviewed By: Yamidiot [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 01:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic you capture the things about Naru-san's and Hina-chan's life so well.
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: November 01, 2008 12:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O Wait wait wait... are you saying this is it for the fic... that was awsome, but you gotta make a sequal or something... -_-, I get where your going with the naruto return thing and stuff but i just would love to see how they manage it all wrote out... if your going with the there hiding it rout then how are they hidding it and i guess it would be a good idea so the baby isn't in danger from the cloud freaks but i still wanna see reactions from their freinds when they find out and how they find out and... Well, you get the point. make a sequal!!! Thanks.... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Perpetual159 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 08:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This couldn't possibly be the end for this story, could it? Because if it is, it world certainly need more dosvre, but the states says "completed". In any case, I loved the concept, and this was incredibly original. I also loved Naruto's sarcasm and roughness. Hinata's split personality was something I wasn't expecting, but it just added more to the twist. And Naruto pregnant... haha! I was laughing for hours! I was glad this didn't turn into some yaoi/yuri fest, and that the story deviate to something so trivial and predictable. You did an amazing job in portraying the characters Feelings and frustration, and For that, you have my unwavering respect.
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: October 24, 2008 23:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great but i need another update soon.I can't wait to see if they go back to themselves... i hope so in a way so it comes full circle they get the experience of what they had and still be themselves.... but i trust in you to make the story work... ^_~
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: October 24, 2008 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok so i'm only on ch 9 but i thought naruto having a baby was worth taking a moment to say... I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY!!!... ^_~
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Tee Hee!! On: March 24, 2008 14:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a really unique story you've got, and I enjoyed reading so far very much. Please keep up the writing! This is maybe the second NaruHina I've ever read, I'm a yaoi fan by nature, but I really enjoyed this one! Love the originality of it.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 01:32 EDT
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Ah, the question if Ai's pregnancy is even one they should have continued, eh? Seriously, I used to be pro-choice, but well, a child is a child. If you can't raise the kid yourself, if they're healthy, get a family to raise teh kid from birth, and make sure the kid is happy and healthy and lives a good life. That's what matters, if you can't provide it, make sure someone else can. Neh. ANyway, continue to update, this story is definitely interesting. And a whole new twist on teh idea of 'gender-bending'. Lol. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 03:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. nice plot. and for is appearently your cheif concern i haven't found any spelling mistakes.great creativity with that 1000 years of death\rasengan combo. what if naruto ,oops,i mean ai, taught gamakichi the rasengan
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Reviewed By: AtlantisWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 19:55 EDT
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Well, it's definitely interesting so far. I think I'll continue watching this fic. Honestly, I like the 'Naruto as a girl' idea, but there aren't very many that don't have her paired with one of the guys.
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Reviewed By: Rokubi no Rajuu On: May 26, 2007 12:40 EDT
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The story line is a great work in progress and it goes with the current story were the Missing nin are trying to get the Kuubi
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 16:46 EDT
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Very strange ideas in here. But a very awesome story too. Keep writing, lets see where the story goes.
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