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| "A Log Pose to Nami" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: A nice story
Reviewed By: R80 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 19:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Bravo, bravo! I happeend upon your story by chance, and I must say I enjoyed it. And the ending left it open for a sequel which was very nice. Looking forward to your sequel(s0, and please check out my story RULE THE SCHOOL.
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Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got very good grammar, and your spelling is better than most I've seen. you may want to double space each paragraph to make an easier read. Now how exactly is Buggy going to react to Luffy appearing before him and Alvida, because him and Alvida have been sailing together for some time. I wonder if there gonna find out that Luffy is Ace's younger brother, both are the Grandsons of Monkey D. Garp and the sons of Monkey D. Dragon the Revolutionary, the most wanted man in the world. Hell the two are probably the nephews of Buggy's late captain, the Pirate King, Gol D. Roger. Misinterpretation is pretty common, Gol D. Roger, GolD Roger, Gold Roger. Very simple mistake. Hope for more. My ff.net account is Anime Insaniac so I will be thus known as such.
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