| "The thoughts of troubled men" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 20:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg. let me guess.... 1.inuyasha 2.shessy 3.koga 4.jingi 5.sota 6.kohaku 7.jaken 8.hojo 9.shippo 10.naraku srry if my spellin is off. i'm really bad at spellin names. plz tell me if i missed n e of them or not. it was fun tryin 2 figure out who they were.
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Reviewed By: akayou On: April 27, 2007 01:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
soo.... some i know some i don't all in all i likey.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was different. Different in a good way. I had never considered this style when telling the inner thoughts. (Big creativity points for you!) Usually they end up as a big monolouge. I loved the way you let us know who is talking as well as what goes through their head. I found myself trying to guess who it was before I got all the "clues". It was fun. But you did pull a few characters that I didn't expect you focus on. Was it because this was a piece about the "Men/Guys of InuYasha" or did you just want to have a nice round number of 10? Anyhow, not much plot. (But with this there shouldn't be...) I did enjoy reading it though.
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