| "A Girl in the Akatsuki" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: NO!
Reviewed By: Kisei [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why are you stopping! ;-;
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Reviewed By: Lil Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 19:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
you should know that there already is a girl in the akatsuki but I loved the story!
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Title: Jebus
Reviewed By: Kisei [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 08:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Jebus! It's been forever since I read your story. And I must say, I love them! Oh yea! Lol. Write more please! ^-^ Ans Army Brat You're a tech tard.
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Reviewed By: Naruto Fan Club [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pls write more i luv this fan fic!!!!! Its funny sad and crazy at the same time!! Naruto Fan Club Please read New Girl In Konoah my first fan fic (My fic is not complete)
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Reviewed By: armybrat14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 08:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story, u need to update soon so we can all see how this turns out :)
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Reviewed By: hyugagirl12 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story hope for the next chapter soon
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Reviewed By: i dont know On: May 28, 2007 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is good, but the only fact I dislike about it is Sasuke and Itachi which you made a little out of chartacter. First, they don't talk much and they don't voice out their concerns and second, your story is out of the plotline and you haven't exclaimed the reasons yet...well, update soon so I can understand.
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Title: Kisei
Reviewed By: Kisei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, You leave such cliff hangers in here, that's why I love you story. Keep up the good work! =3
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Reviewed By: Siekuto [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. Nice length, good story, great flow. Please continue your work. Regards, Siekuto.
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Reviewed By: RMCY13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oou good...veryy good plot.
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm pretty good fic.. next time make them longer so we could see the plot more ... u know.. anyway reallly good fic!
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