| "A Little Known Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 08:14 CST
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this sounds like it's going to be a great story, is botan (or another ferry girl) kagome's mom? i hope to read more soon
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 05:06 CDT
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this is a great story, please please please continue it
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 22:30 CST
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Wait a minute you changed alot of stuff....well I seems like you left off form where you where after a over view of what happened but the rest is gone is Kurama still alive? does that part of the story even exsist any more.......most of this beging wouldn't make sence if I didn't read what you wrote be for I hope you fix it.....I realy do love this fic ya know.....................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 02:00 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
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The plot/storyline is really good but the word choice/spelling is pretty bad. You may want to get a beta or at the very least run it through a spelling & grammar checker, I have Office Word 2003 which is really good for editing things for example. In the with Botan section of the latest chapter you have set when it should be sit or sat & setting instead of sitting, meet instead of met, also Hachi is a Tanuki or raccoon dog. There are other goofs in other places like dropped letters, pai instead of pain for example. Hope this helps.
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Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i under stand about the moveing the goats thing i have to do things like that all of the time when i visit my great aunt out in mississippi so when you get a chance please up date soon
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 19:38 CDT
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Sorry to hear (umm read) about that I hope you will work things out...If its anyconsilation I'm realy happy that you fixed that so much more of that makes sence now...XD.....To bad for Botan though...but Kagome's father has to find out some time because he leaves with Botan to the spirt world......hmmmm well I will just have to wait untill you are well anough to write a new chapter....hopefully its soon........XD........Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 23:26 CDT
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Wow ether I have good timeing or you are just so happy that I reviewed that you decided to post a new chapter just for me..lol.....JK.....I was nice to see at least half of what happened be Kagome was (born in your fic)....I just wander if it was my computer (which it never did that befor) or the way you typed it but like severle words words where cut off of every line it was realy annoying...sigh I was able to get the jist of things though.......well I hope that you update soon and that it wont be like that again................NYuka
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Title: GREAT STORY
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 01:31 CDT
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Your .....Your...so...so .....Evil....hehe.....Why did ya kill the old miko man......You better not kill Kirara...I will be so miserably distroted......it koo that shippo gets to be with Kagome after all....XD......O-ya this is the first time I've posted so its only right to tell you that I'm a new reader...XD....who was it that was all like "a miko how interesting" was it Kurama (batting eyes hopefully).....I might have read it wrong but he did just same Kagome didn't he?? Ok just so I'm clear....Kikyo is the mother of Boton and some sickly kid in the feudal era and Inuyasha is the father...Boton in Kagome's mother....Kagome's grandpa had a younger brother,and older sister, as daughter, and a son who was Kagome's father.....Kagome's father...was a paligamist having two wifes Boton and Mrs. Higerashi....Buyo is a demon cat like Kirara.....Kagome is staying with her dads sister that refused to take up the family duty.....Kagome accsedently wished to live in a fairy tail and is switching back and forth between reality and a fairytail....and Kagome's cousin is more involed in this then it first let off...............ok did I get every thing...tell me if I misunderstude anything ....ya.........o ya I forget what chapter it was but when Midoriko is watch Kagome and call's it "Days of My Meko" that was so funny and when she was searching for the remote to rewind it that was just hilarious....XD.........update soon plz............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 04:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOO very good Keep it up I can't wait, did you really kill her though? Yoko is interested not always the best news...*S*
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Reviewed By: Mrs Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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O.O keade noooooooooooooo!!!!!! oh by the way interesting story.... but why isnt fight back or any thing!! -mumbles- is someone grabbed me by my hair and insulted me and told me to stay away from some boy i didnt even know i would threaten them...then beat the crap outta them ^-^ ok update now... heeeeee....
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 05:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH my god that was great please when you caqn please!!!!! update soon.
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: June 12, 2007 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WOW...I MEAN...WOW! THAT WAS INTERESTING. I LOVE HOW YOU GAVE BOTAN A KIND OF BUBBLEY/I-DONT-GIVE-A-FUCK SENSE. ILL BE LOOKING FOR THE UPDATE, PS HOPE ITS SOON.
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Reviewed By: crystal lilith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 19:51 CDT
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Hm, that was unusual…but I'm liking it…I especially like the insight towards Yukio's past and the revelation that he's a descendant of Miroku. It was also interesting to find out that Botan is some possibly Kagome's biological mother…
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Reviewed By: armybrat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really really good so far... update please!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh I love this please update soon.. this is gonna be great.
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so does that mean Kikyo is Kagome's Grandmother? Please update soon...
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 20:59 CDT
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wow... i thought that kikyo, midiroku and botan were all in this together? I guess not though... i don't know what else to say except that I will be waiting for your next update ^^ love always, ~mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: RubyScarlett [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon! Love the story.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 15:55 CDT
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Great work! I really loved it! Keep it up and update as soon as you can! :P
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Reviewed By: Hime Jun Hi On: April 26, 2007 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!!! MORE!!!! MORE!!!! plz?
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Reviewed By: Hime jun hi On: April 24, 2007 21:59 CDT
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WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHE! MUST! PAY! Can yuseke HELP his cousin?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 15:55 CDT
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great work and update asap.
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