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| "We are back!" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Unyu!!!
Reviewed By: karupin_019 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 05:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've rated you...hehe I'm glad you started writing, as in glad! But, as applies to everyone, there is still room for improvement. First of all I'm confused on which one is talking at the moment; you won't put their names! And the second one, as what nateriver told you, you need to make your style more expressive, for a good author carries away their reader...^_^ Anyways, good job, cokie! I look forward for the next chapter. Gambatte! With all love, karupin_019
| Title: Kimiko
Reviewed By: nateriver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 05:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would like to congratulate you for your the first author that made a story about BECK but you lack something here. You tend to only write the character's dialouge, which is not bad but you should also describe their actions/feelings, where they are and such...I hope to see improvement next chapter
| Reviewed By: Tenshibabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it! can you believe that this is the only BECK fan fic on this site!?!? serioiusly this is a great anime! keep writing, update soon!
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