| "shikamarus love" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: ninja_anomane [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 11:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
grrrrrrr that is nothing like neji some random person holds anomane back from clawing the crap out of kayla grrrrrrr
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: ninja_anomane [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i did this for no reason at all but any ways ur story is good ur friend ninja_anomane
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Reviewed By: Shimazu Rukia On: June 01, 2007 22:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
you dumbass and now penguines will take control of your mind
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Reviewed By: killingdiva [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this was a wonderfully romantic story and I dont care if wonderfully is a word or not.You should write a sequel to this with even more drama Your 1 and only killingdiva
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 17:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
you are good, but you kinda need to watch how you use dialogue, becuase the current format you have is kinda hard to keep reading after a while.. also you should use more details in your story... please don't take this review the wrong way, sis, i like the story and the plot, just i have a few things to say and i hope you have the patience to actually read it..=p
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