"Just Desserts" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: HalfDemonPrincessoftheAbyss On: July 10, 2005 14:36 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i like this story. he is alone. he is suffering. how nice. please continue with your work. it is enjoyable. ryou is a loner and can take care of himself in a way that is most painful for others who get on his bad side. how enjoyable. death. pain. destruction.
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Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: January 18, 2004 05:14 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Pleaze continue!!!
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Reviewed By: kristen89 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 17:40 CST Comment/Review: wow that was excellent! poor Bakura does he ever believe he has true friends? please continue writing!
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Reviewed By: Shadow Kitten 9831 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 21:53 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really liked this. No, I loved this. |
Reviewed By: Nuku nuku On: October 12, 2002 19:44 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was great! your syle of writing is excelent.
Speling ang grammer is good.
Very creative.
I enjoyed it more than words can discribe.
the obvious overall rating would defenitly be 10/10! Very, very good job ! ;) |
Reviewed By: Dragon On: June 21, 2002 16:44 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Well it was graet. Even Great is an understatment.
I think it is exellent |
Reviewed By: Brockiepoo15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2002 17:52 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow, that was reaaallly deep. Even though I don't like Bakura, that really was interesting. I liked it and it meant a lot! Keep it up!
-Brockiepoo15 PikaRppr1 =) |