| "The sand betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Ya know me!
Reviewed By: evilvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, baby! I read it again for the third time,try to update faster, don't be a lazy ass like me,ok? Ya know that it's good!See ya later, love!
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Reviewed By: zomg nayerz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 23:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
you should try and space out the paragraphs. its a little bit hard to read. i also loveee the idea of Sasuke/Hinata
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 01:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
The part about Sasuke wanting to marry Hinata is not clear but the plot seems promising. I would include more on the sands plans for both Gaara and Hinata are pawns at this moment
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Title: thankk youu
Reviewed By: zomg nayerz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 23:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
thank you for updatingg finallyy. :) try and make the chapters a little bit longer too maybe?
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Title: Great Idea
Reviewed By: zomg nayerz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 13:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pairing Hinata and Gaara is a veryy clever idea! Please continue this story. I think it has great potential.
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