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| "Slate" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Rika-chan4300 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 18:07 CDT
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Beautiful...absolutely, completely beautiful. A work of art. If I hadn't known better, I would have sworn the author was the guy in the story--that that had actually happened to you. Amazing work. Keep it up.
| Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 17:20 CDT
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Silveh, darling, I am impressed. The feeling in this one was great, despite being so short. I thought the transition from talking about her to talking directly to her was slightly odd, but not enough to be distracting to the story. All in all, I liked it a lot. Wonderful job, lahve.
| Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 00:43 CDT
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-sighsss- Wow, that was a really nice one-shot. I saw you posted this in self-promotion thread so I had to see what you wrote. I'm glad I did, though maybe there's one too many "God, I miss her" phrases but it's understandable. I think we all think a phrase over and over in our minds. There's nothing an author can do to fix that right? But yeah, that was great. I hope they get back together again soon, even if it's like twenty years later. Mm, that'll be interesting to read if you wrote that, but from her point of view. Very nice, grey~
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