| "Gravity of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 22:31 CDT
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aww, so cute. More ear fondling please!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 21:54 CDT
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Had me smiling almost the whole way through. Fun, lighthearted chapter, very well done. Wonder what part Entei will play, why Sess saved Kagome, how Kikyo will handle the IY/Kag dynamic, and just where is this IY/Kagome relationship going? Like it or not, she IS a comp. program. Can't wait to see how this plays out!
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 21:48 CDT
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I love Hanyou EXE... I read it a while back, and I've been keeping up on it, and when I saw this fic i was like "hey this is just like that one fic, Hanyou EXE..." and then I saw what you said and I'm like "Oh it is after that..I knew it" lol I like this tho! very cute!!! i wanna c wot happens when his friends meet kagome..
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 21:10 CDT
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hehehe stay away from my ears you crazy woman. hehehe adorable chapter, i cant wait to read the next one. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: XxDemonic_PrincessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cuuutee! Cant wait for the next chapter! Update soon please!!
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 18:35 CDT
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The way Inuyasha is eager to establish Kagome's really Kagome is so sweet, even if his manners leaves a lot to wish for. I am very curious about who Kagome really is and what she can do. She's obviously based on Kikyo's small sister in appearence, but otherwise... optimal update function? Able to nestle in in any kind of program and control it? It must be something like that, otherwise she wouldn't be at such risk. But then, why involve Inuyasha? At all? I am SO going to be reading you...
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Title: Hm...
Reviewed By: Havoc08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 07:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I was up for 2 hours almost reading all the chapters..that says something o_o Good work on this thing Riny-chan. I'm honestly impressed. If your story can make ME feel sorry for Inuyasha and this robotic incarnation of Kagome..it's damn good.
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Reviewed By: crimsonbloodmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 05:29 CDT
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So far this story has been so COOL!!! I so love it! please update A.S.A.P PLEASE!!!!!! And please make Inu figure it out in the next chappy. Thanks. C.B.M.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 01:14 CDT
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Man o' Man what a twist. I hope Inuyasha figures out who Kagome is before the s**t hits the fan. Kikyo better watch her back, Naraku seems like he's pissed and who knows what he'll do now. I really want to know what was in Sess's mind when he decided to put Kagome in a robot body, I mean he's gotta know that'll be torture for Inuyasha, then again I think I just answered my own question. Read ya later
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 20:56 CDT
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Congrats on the new kitten! Like children, aren't they? And I understand about the chapter gutting. I hate to rush my writing, too. Blond hair???? That's gonna take some getting used to. Ah well, least she isn't a K'clone. Love the way she 'dog boy' ed him, but will our baka'Yasha figure it out? I see angst ahead. (I say that like it's a bad thing). Can't wait to find out how this turns out.
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 17:41 CDT
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You know how I wanted INuyasha and Kagome to be able to have a somewhat "normal" relationship and that I therefore was a little hesitant? Well, now you got me! : )
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 17:31 CDT
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waaaaiiiiiii.. i waited soooo long for this chapter.. im so glad you updated. I can't believe they made kagome into a blond. oh dear lord. please update when you get a chance, i want to see if inu recognizes kagome.. so badly infact. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 17:03 CDT
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awws! i thotz u had forgotten 'bout ur story. very nice chappie though. i really enjoyed :] keep updating!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 16:47 CDT
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What the fuck.... why does she have to have blond hair....... Sesshomaru is such a pig.... Loves it so far , update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 11:33 CDT
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I acctually don't know what I feel for this story, but something's got be captivated. It's really well written and the characterisation is really well done. The plot is also intreaguing and I have nothing to complain about. I guess I'm just thinking... unless it turns out Kagome is comatose and can have her mind restored inside her, then she and Inuyasha can't ever be together for "real" so to say, and... Oh well. One can like the story for the story and not the outcome, eh? So: I'll be reading you!
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