| "Gravity of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: Finbastard [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 05:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update, it has been 2 years already from last time!
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Reviewed By: yume_no_hanabira [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 18:31 CDT
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Please update soon. I love your story!
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Reviewed By: bluefire101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a pretty good story so far :), I wonder whats going to happen in the next chapter
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 02:06 CDT
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Thanks for updating, I do so enjoy this story. Hmm, so Sesshomaru looks like he has the beginnings of crush on Rin. Seems like his brother is also feeling the pinch with Kagome,things are getting so complicated. Well until next time, Happy writing.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOO not the bunnies... they are bad evil thins when they get lost.
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Title: Falx?
Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 03:39 CDT
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I read through your story, and I've got to admit to liking it, the biggest thing that's bugged me since chapter 2 is why introduce an OC when you still have main characters you haven't used yet? Obviously I'm talking about Shippou, he hasn't shown up yet and he'd be the perfect choice for someone who skipped a few grades and is a computer wiz. Keeps him small and cute, and of all the InuYasha characters he's the one I see as dealing best with computers.
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Reviewed By: XxDemonic_PrincessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Greaaattt! I can't wait for the next chapter! This story is really friggin interesting! Very good! Keep up the great work and hope to see an update from you soon
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Reviewed By: Tweak [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 15:30 CDT
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awesome!!! really cute!! update soon!!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 01:27 CDT
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The angst is killing me, aaah. My what a tangled web we weave. Was Kagome actually Kikyo's sister and she died or something and Kikyo captured her essence or memories and made it into the AI. Sounds so futuristic or I could be just grasping at straws. How will this ever become right for Kagome? Please update soon
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 22:21 CDT
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ahhhh *bangs head on keyboard* ghbfjorug Good chapter, but i feel as if im still in the dark. What is up with kagome. Is she the what, spirit, of the former kagome? How come inu doesnt recognize her as kikyou's lil sister? argh, you have to update soon, please oh please???
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 21:41 CDT
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argh! i always get so mad at inuyasha for his kikyo obsession! baka dog!
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 14:11 CDT
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LadyCash pretty much sums up my opinion! It is hard to figure out what's going on, so I'm hooked! Kagome was Kikyo's sister, now dead and reanimated (the irony...) in a AI partly through programming - and the one truly in love with Inuyasha? Twisted relations AND evil guys on the run - this is NEAT!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 13:02 CDT
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And the plot thickens! So, Kagome/AI was real at one time, not just based on someone live. Cool. Neat twist. I really felt for her this chapter. No fair! But how did her soul end up in an AI? Will IY remember her? Will he stop being a baka? (probably not) I can't wait to find out!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 22:06 CDT
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Drama,so many questions so little space. What are those two going to now, this is just the beginning of the shiznit to come. Good reconnection with Kagome and Inu they're going to need each other, I know I have to be patient but I'm so anxious to see how this is going to pan out, sigh. Well read ya later, update soon.
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 23:35 CDT
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I love this story as much as I loved Hanyou.EXE files. Please update soon.
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