| "Gravity of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 01:27 CDT
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The angst is killing me, aaah. My what a tangled web we weave. Was Kagome actually Kikyo's sister and she died or something and Kikyo captured her essence or memories and made it into the AI. Sounds so futuristic or I could be just grasping at straws. How will this ever become right for Kagome? Please update soon
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 22:21 CDT
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ahhhh *bangs head on keyboard* ghbfjorug Good chapter, but i feel as if im still in the dark. What is up with kagome. Is she the what, spirit, of the former kagome? How come inu doesnt recognize her as kikyou's lil sister? argh, you have to update soon, please oh please???
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 21:41 CDT
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argh! i always get so mad at inuyasha for his kikyo obsession! baka dog!
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 14:11 CDT
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LadyCash pretty much sums up my opinion! It is hard to figure out what's going on, so I'm hooked! Kagome was Kikyo's sister, now dead and reanimated (the irony...) in a AI partly through programming - and the one truly in love with Inuyasha? Twisted relations AND evil guys on the run - this is NEAT!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 13:02 CDT
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And the plot thickens! So, Kagome/AI was real at one time, not just based on someone live. Cool. Neat twist. I really felt for her this chapter. No fair! But how did her soul end up in an AI? Will IY remember her? Will he stop being a baka? (probably not) I can't wait to find out!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 22:06 CDT
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Drama,so many questions so little space. What are those two going to now, this is just the beginning of the shiznit to come. Good reconnection with Kagome and Inu they're going to need each other, I know I have to be patient but I'm so anxious to see how this is going to pan out, sigh. Well read ya later, update soon.
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 23:35 CDT
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I love this story as much as I loved Hanyou.EXE files. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 22:31 CDT
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aww, so cute. More ear fondling please!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 21:54 CDT
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Had me smiling almost the whole way through. Fun, lighthearted chapter, very well done. Wonder what part Entei will play, why Sess saved Kagome, how Kikyo will handle the IY/Kag dynamic, and just where is this IY/Kagome relationship going? Like it or not, she IS a comp. program. Can't wait to see how this plays out!
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 21:48 CDT
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I love Hanyou EXE... I read it a while back, and I've been keeping up on it, and when I saw this fic i was like "hey this is just like that one fic, Hanyou EXE..." and then I saw what you said and I'm like "Oh it is after that..I knew it" lol I like this tho! very cute!!! i wanna c wot happens when his friends meet kagome..
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 21:10 CDT
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hehehe stay away from my ears you crazy woman. hehehe adorable chapter, i cant wait to read the next one. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: XxDemonic_PrincessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cuuutee! Cant wait for the next chapter! Update soon please!!
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 18:35 CDT
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The way Inuyasha is eager to establish Kagome's really Kagome is so sweet, even if his manners leaves a lot to wish for. I am very curious about who Kagome really is and what she can do. She's obviously based on Kikyo's small sister in appearence, but otherwise... optimal update function? Able to nestle in in any kind of program and control it? It must be something like that, otherwise she wouldn't be at such risk. But then, why involve Inuyasha? At all? I am SO going to be reading you...
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Title: Hm...
Reviewed By: Havoc08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 07:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I was up for 2 hours almost reading all the chapters..that says something o_o Good work on this thing Riny-chan. I'm honestly impressed. If your story can make ME feel sorry for Inuyasha and this robotic incarnation of Kagome..it's damn good.
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Reviewed By: crimsonbloodmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 05:29 CDT
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So far this story has been so COOL!!! I so love it! please update A.S.A.P PLEASE!!!!!! And please make Inu figure it out in the next chappy. Thanks. C.B.M.
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