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| "Arubaito" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] | | Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 › » ] | Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 15:55 PST
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whoa an update and a good one. i love how the story is progressing. not really fast and to really slow. your story is more like an acutally realshonship then some others that i've read. and it has Jou being drunk. another kiss, and Niitas' own brand of behavior.can't wait for the next one.
| Title: Yey!!
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 15:29 PST
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OK, so before I review this once-again brilliant chapter, I am going to lecture you!! HELL HATH NO FURY LIKE A WOMAN SCORNED, ARISU!!!!! Um... sorry. I don't really even know what that means, but to ME it means you suck for not emailing me, coming on MSN anymore OR updating your awesome fic!!! *hyperventilates* Now that that's out of the way... XD I LOVED this chapter. I LOVE the references to Jou shoving a finger up his nose to draw attention, I LOVED the rabid shounen-ai kissing scene... it was hot. Oh so hot. And a lot of things in this chapter made me laugh out loud and make passers-by at work stare at me oddly. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue with this!! Btw, I'm on a roll with my Kaiba x OC fic that you researched a title for me for XD I'd love for you to read it some time! It's not finished yet, though. Your story has inspired me with my own ^_^ I'd love for you to email me some time, cause I'm not sure if you still use the email address that's still in my contacts anymore... I miss talking to you!!! T_T Anyways, all my love, take care, hope all is well with your studies etc. etc. etc. ... and love ya!! Ja!! *huggles*
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 10:12 PST
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Guess I haven't reviewed in a while. I love this story, but I want to read more of it. Why haven't you updated since september? Anyway, the story is great, especially the slow progression in Joey and Seto's relationship (hell, those two would take a long time to develop any sort of feelings for each other, let alone admit such feelings to each other). So, it's a great story. Now if if only you could update faster, lol. Okay okay, update soon, alright? I gotta get going, ja ne.
| Title: Ahhhhh!!!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: December 06, 2007 19:03 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a new chapter...right???? Im not sure, I just moved to Oklahoma and am on a very hecktic scedual, I cant even tell my head from my ass right now @-@ anywho if it is Yaaaay!!!! If its not, please update b/c I miss your story ^^' Sorry to be so brief but at least im dedicated ne? Ever so busy, wish I wasent ans Merry Christmas incase im not able to wish it to you for some unknown reason lol
| Reviewed By: cinque [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 02:09 PDT
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this was really, really good. You HAVE to continue soon. Can´t wait for more.
| Reviewed By: Lasae On: September 05, 2007 14:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
He was staring in determination in the opposite direction however, so much so that Ryou, who he hadn't realized was in his line of spaced out sight, got rather flustered, and said hesitantly; "Is there something on my face?" It's sentences like that that make this such an entertaining story to read. Also; he characters are wonderfully well-written, it has atmosphere and great pace. I love the premise and this is probably the first I've read that manages it so well. I'm very much looking forward to Jou's reaction to the mess Kaiba's office must be in. ^^ Good luck with the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 15:30 PDT
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Jou, Anzu, Yugi all in a bed together. and the first thing Jou does is check for cloths. so funny, and sleep talking Yugi. well Jou got his job back, and Seto will never be without an assistant. so next chapter soon please.
| Title: yo yo yo
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 16:54 PDT
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How about we call it even? I didn't even have time to review your last chapter, and you just reviewed mine, so consider this my obligation owed to you. XD Absolutely fantastic chapter, I must admit. I love the way you opened it by Jou waking up after a drunken night out with his friends. I also loved the whole "ice-cream winter tradition on the beach" scene. Its the small ideas that count and I think you really hit the nail on the head with them! In other news, I bought a really awesome Revlon eye-shadow yesterday for $5 down from $30. Totally irrelevant but I'm stoked, lol. As for my writings, DO NOT FEAR!! They are in the works. I just need to figure out what I'm going to do with this next chapter XD. I have many ideas in mind but I need to decide which one to use. So anyway, happy writings and as per usual I look forward to more!! JG-chan ~~~
| Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 09:35 PDT
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Good chapter. I'm glad Jou finally swallowed his pride and asked. Yay for Anzu getting them together. This is really wonderful.
| Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: July 23, 2007 11:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww, crap! I wanna find out what happends next!!! I can never predict whats going to happen in your stories. You seem to stray away from the norm and portray these unique and unexpected, but pleasently so, situatins where the most fitting, though still surprizing, out-come comes to light! You've made a fan outta me lol I cant wait for the next chapter! ;p
| Reviewed By: discordlives [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 01:56 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was really good. I like the emotion in it.
| Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 18:37 PDT
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XD Touche, I yield. I admit, I'm very nerdy, and it's not just becuz of the fanfiction or the anime card games. I quoted Newton's 1st natural law during the 2nd Pirates of the Caribbean movie when Will Turner and Norrington were rolling along in the water wheel when my friend asked, "How can it keep on rolling?" But anyways, enough about me, back to the little plot twist! I'm glad that Niita probably won't be making any more weird appearances (keyword: probably). And I kinda like how Kaiba fired him for saying no. And in general, it's nice that you didn't have the outcome that ppl expected, if that makes sense. Well, cya!
| Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 17:11 PDT
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Good chapter. Seto is being his usual arrogant self and never considered how Jou might feel. He just did what was best for himself. I hope they both reconsider. Good luck at school.
| Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 15:26 PDT
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no one on this planet likes the sun except morning people, who are the spawns of evil. Jou got fired, Seto handled that very very badly. oh well good luck at the uni. just don't forget your story.
| Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: July 15, 2007 19:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im blown away! I was not expectiong Kaiba to make a move, I was plesently surprized! XD Nitta is a goobe and can only imagine what she'll do should/when Kaiba fires her. Awsome job, im totally looking forward to the next installment, ja! ;p
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