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Title: wheeeee!!
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 17:08 PDT
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LOVE how you portray Niita. For an OC she's really quite a character. Reminds me of a friend of mine when she's pissed.... Anyway this chapter was absolutely magical!! Especially the ending. I totally didn't see it coming when Kaiba honed in on Jou like that. Very nice. *applauds*
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 16:49 PDT
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so cute, very cute. don't like Niita though she's annoying. can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: LOVE IT!!! GIRAFFE
Reviewed By: gabou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 21:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love it so far I really love Niita she is just soo cute I really love her And this story is one that makes you like Anzu, I think thats actually good. I love how you explained the "English soap opera."
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 16:51 PDT
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Sweet chapter. The Soap Opera part was very funny and the boys reaction to them is just like mine. How can you watch it, Anzu. She is a good friend though. Kaiba is starting to realise he likes Jounouchi more than as a friend which is good. Niita is a really weird one.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 14:33 PDT
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You REALLY know that there's something weird and slightly nerdy about you when you stick natural selection theories into YGO fanfiction... but I don't mind, cuz I'm half-nerdy myself. Anyway, I wasn't really expecting that kiss scene for a while, but it was nice. I like snowy backgrounds for romantic scenes... ^_^ Cya!
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 24, 2007 22:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thankyou! And yeah, he probibly does have super recepton being a workaholic and billionar lol Kabia on his cell while climbing a mountin, why is it that I can picture that? lol
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Title: raaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 17:42 PDT
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Oh my GAAAAAWWWWWWD I'm soooo sorry for taking so long with this chapter! It has ACTUALLY taken me like... a week to be able to read it xD that's how busy I've been! Anyway I thouroughly enjoyed this chapter, once again, well done. Niita just cracks me up man. She's like an anime Barbie x Paris Hilton x Anzu... the way I see it lol. Can't wait for the next installment! And, btw, in case you care, my next chapter will be up very shortly. It is in the works!
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Title: raaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 17:42 PDT
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Oh my GAAAAAWWWWWWD I'm soooo sorry for taking so long with this chapter! It has ACTUALLY taken me like... a week to be able to read it xD that's how busy I've been! Anyway I thouroughly enjoyed this chapter, once again, well done. Niita just cracks me up man. She's like an anime Barbie x Paris Hilton x Anzu... the way I see it lol. Can't wait for the next installment! And, btw, in case you care, my next chapter will be up very shortly. It is in the works!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 13:01 PDT
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Haha, you know there's something weird about you when you stick the natural laws of physics into a YGO fanfiction. At least, weird in a good sort of way... Overall, it's a pretty good story, with some slightly cliche moments. And I actually know what you're talking about with the gashapon machines! I was in Hong Kong, and I got two Naruto ones (Tsunade and Naruto) and a Fullmetal Alchemist one (Scar). I didn't see any YGO ones though; if there was one, I would've bought as many as I could. Well, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 05:15 PDT
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Great chapter and just too cute. They each got the others dragons. Seems like Niita is not the complete idiot she seems. He cryptic comment to Joey was pricelees. I wonder if he will see if for what it was. I hope they figure it out themselves soon.
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 12:58 PDT
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great chapter can't wait for the next aknkkskd alaska(ak)newton kansas(nk) kasas(ks) kid(kd) lot of k's huh
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Title: Neat!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 13, 2007 20:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story, I finished it all in one day! Really thought Kaiba's phone would have no reception in this last chapter but I guess going uncontious works too lol Cant wait for you to update, im totally hooked ;p
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 17:38 PDT
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to funny, feel sorry for them being locked in a closet, not fun. anyway your story cracks me up. have a good b-day
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Title: o_o
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 20:03 PDT
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Yo yo yo! Happy birthday dawg! Man, that was a lengthy chapter! Good nonetheless, though! ^_^ it's actually a rather believable situation. Offices are pitch black even during the day if you're in a room with no natural light, let alone lightbulbs that don't work! Poor Kaiba, I wonder what will become of them? Once again looking forward to more!! hehe JG-chan ~~ xx
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 11:49 PDT
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Funny chapter. I could see where this was going as soon as she told him about the door knob. Well that was Jounouchi's third bad thing for the day and possible in a very twisted way Kaiba's third good thing. Happy Birthday!
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