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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 17:11 PDT
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Good chapter. Seto is being his usual arrogant self and never considered how Jou might feel. He just did what was best for himself. I hope they both reconsider. Good luck at school.
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 15:26 PDT
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no one on this planet likes the sun except morning people, who are the spawns of evil. Jou got fired, Seto handled that very very badly. oh well good luck at the uni. just don't forget your story.
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: July 15, 2007 19:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im blown away! I was not expectiong Kaiba to make a move, I was plesently surprized! XD Nitta is a goobe and can only imagine what she'll do should/when Kaiba fires her. Awsome job, im totally looking forward to the next installment, ja! ;p
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Title: wheeeee!!
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 17:08 PDT
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LOVE how you portray Niita. For an OC she's really quite a character. Reminds me of a friend of mine when she's pissed.... Anyway this chapter was absolutely magical!! Especially the ending. I totally didn't see it coming when Kaiba honed in on Jou like that. Very nice. *applauds*
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 16:49 PDT
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so cute, very cute. don't like Niita though she's annoying. can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: LOVE IT!!! GIRAFFE
Reviewed By: gabou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 21:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love it so far I really love Niita she is just soo cute I really love her And this story is one that makes you like Anzu, I think thats actually good. I love how you explained the "English soap opera."
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 16:51 PDT
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Sweet chapter. The Soap Opera part was very funny and the boys reaction to them is just like mine. How can you watch it, Anzu. She is a good friend though. Kaiba is starting to realise he likes Jounouchi more than as a friend which is good. Niita is a really weird one.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 14:33 PDT
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You REALLY know that there's something weird and slightly nerdy about you when you stick natural selection theories into YGO fanfiction... but I don't mind, cuz I'm half-nerdy myself. Anyway, I wasn't really expecting that kiss scene for a while, but it was nice. I like snowy backgrounds for romantic scenes... ^_^ Cya!
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 24, 2007 22:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thankyou! And yeah, he probibly does have super recepton being a workaholic and billionar lol Kabia on his cell while climbing a mountin, why is it that I can picture that? lol
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Title: raaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 17:42 PDT
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Oh my GAAAAAWWWWWWD I'm soooo sorry for taking so long with this chapter! It has ACTUALLY taken me like... a week to be able to read it xD that's how busy I've been! Anyway I thouroughly enjoyed this chapter, once again, well done. Niita just cracks me up man. She's like an anime Barbie x Paris Hilton x Anzu... the way I see it lol. Can't wait for the next installment! And, btw, in case you care, my next chapter will be up very shortly. It is in the works!
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Title: raaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 17:42 PDT
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Oh my GAAAAAWWWWWWD I'm soooo sorry for taking so long with this chapter! It has ACTUALLY taken me like... a week to be able to read it xD that's how busy I've been! Anyway I thouroughly enjoyed this chapter, once again, well done. Niita just cracks me up man. She's like an anime Barbie x Paris Hilton x Anzu... the way I see it lol. Can't wait for the next installment! And, btw, in case you care, my next chapter will be up very shortly. It is in the works!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 13:01 PDT
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Haha, you know there's something weird about you when you stick the natural laws of physics into a YGO fanfiction. At least, weird in a good sort of way... Overall, it's a pretty good story, with some slightly cliche moments. And I actually know what you're talking about with the gashapon machines! I was in Hong Kong, and I got two Naruto ones (Tsunade and Naruto) and a Fullmetal Alchemist one (Scar). I didn't see any YGO ones though; if there was one, I would've bought as many as I could. Well, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 05:15 PDT
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Great chapter and just too cute. They each got the others dragons. Seems like Niita is not the complete idiot she seems. He cryptic comment to Joey was pricelees. I wonder if he will see if for what it was. I hope they figure it out themselves soon.
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 12:58 PDT
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great chapter can't wait for the next aknkkskd alaska(ak)newton kansas(nk) kasas(ks) kid(kd) lot of k's huh
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Title: Neat!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 13, 2007 20:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story, I finished it all in one day! Really thought Kaiba's phone would have no reception in this last chapter but I guess going uncontious works too lol Cant wait for you to update, im totally hooked ;p
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