| "Eternal Resurrection" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Zofo On: January 24, 2008 19:47 CST
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I wanna know what's in the letter (does a Goku pout)! Please give us some more hints. Still, their search for the dragonballs should bring them closer together, hope so as Vegeta is still very prickly.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonSin On: January 22, 2008 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope Goku and Vegeta get together soon. I can't wait for Vegeta to gets pregnant I look forward to your next update!!
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Reviewed By: Zofo On: December 05, 2007 16:49 CST
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Loved the glacier theory as I'm a bit of a science geek myself, and glad Vegeta didn't speak down to Goku when explaining. I'm looking forward to what's in the letter and Goku trying to hide that he knows. Hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonSin On: December 04, 2007 21:10 CST
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Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can't wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON. P.S. I hate thoughts final exam questions too.
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Reviewed By: S.A.M. On: October 12, 2007 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very well written, with only a few instances of errors. A very enjoyable read! I'm looking forward to the update.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonSin On: September 27, 2007 19:24 CDT
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Loved it I can't wait to read more so update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonSin On: September 02, 2007 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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Title: Katonie
Reviewed By: Katonie Surue On: August 27, 2007 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARE you dropping this fic? Pleas don't! I really want to see it finished. It's starting off so well. I mean, you haven't even gotten to the part where it's revealed what Chi-chi's been doing! Us readers need to know that. Especially Chi-chi Haters- such as myself. So please update again soon, I'll love you forever if yo do!!! Hugs & Kisses Katonie
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Reviewed By: lovecoma [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 21:24 CDT
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Very good chapter! I like the idea of Vegeta knowing some of Goku's family tree. It makes sense that Raditz would have spoke of them at some point over all those years Vegeta and Raditz knew each other. I look forward to seeing where you go with everything.
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Title: Yay, another chapter!!
Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 03:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style of writing is a bit new to me. I've seen something a bit like it, but not close enough to be considered the same. Your spelling is good, but I did catch a few mistakes. As for your grammar, you have to remember that each character talks different and that grammatic slang isn't a bad thing. Is English your first language? Also, do you have a proofreader for this story? As far as the story goes, this is a great new twist on a rather old plot idea. I like the humor factor quite a lot as well as the way the characters are fleshed out. I do apologize for having not reviewed before now. I very much look forward to reading the next chapter as soon as possible! If you need a proofreader please contact me at ultistarmon@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: soadbob On: July 27, 2007 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really can't wait to see what's going on with this fic! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: lovecoma [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 23:45 CDT
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It's a good start. I look forward to reading more. And bullshit is an awesome card game; I love playing that. I have a feeling Goku would lose horribly though. :D
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