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| "The king and I" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: very good
Reviewed By: chii-yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i liked it alot i think tamiki and honey would make a good couple but i imagined him with takashi but it does't matter its still cute when i read the others comment they said there were errors i didn't even notice them because i so into the story its really good man igoing to be dreaming about that scene forever.
| Reviewed By: nougatpopsparkle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked it!! it was well written in my opinion...i dont really pay attention to grammar or spelling but yea...i just rate how much i liked it. i still hav a lot of characters to go...i wonder if i can fill the whole thing up. im going to sing a song...hmm, lets sing the doom song.doom doom doom, doom doom, doom, dooooooom. well, i gots 3651 characters left...less now, thats weird...if you type fast enough you cant even see all the numbers!! i dont think i can do it all...i hav only put like...500 letters/numbers. oh well, loved the story!!!
| Title: [CoinxOperatedxBoy]
Reviewed By: happybunnygod666999 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 18:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehehe... smexy.. so... why did u change honey's age?
| Reviewed By: Saanrio [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 21:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
I did enjoy this, though I am not usually interested in anything explicit involving Honey. The choice to change his age was interesting, I am curious why you felt that was necessary, since part of what I have always enjoyed most about Honey was the contrast in him. However, please edit this when you do get it beta'd and I'll probably read it again. Despite the spelling errors, it was intriguing. In my opinion, this would be best left as a one-shot, but I'm interested to see what else you might come up with in this and other fandoms. Keep writing! :o)
| Reviewed By: TheAngelIsrafel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tell me when you get it beta-ed then I'll adjust my spelling grade, I'm happy you used an unknown pairing they're my fave, hence then KaoruXNekozawa pairing... I hope you write more fics like this too... i don't think that ther are ebough out there yet. Anywho I am off to type more in Fixated, I am almost done, Make more fics please
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